U-Kiss - Ad infinitum

Jul 10, 2011 22:00

Title: Ad infinitum 
Pairing: None
Rating: G
Summary: They're more than just seven men; they're a chain, a never-ending cycle, with each new piece being attached to the last so that they can never do anything but grow.
A/N: This is a character-study of sorts, mildly based on the relay talk that Super Junior did a long time ago. Each member reflects on ( Read more... )

fandom: u-kiss, pairing: none

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x_lovelight July 11 2011, 03:30:27 UTC
This was so well written, I have no words for it, tbh. It's so realistic, as if it has happened before.

You really portrayed each member's characteristics and personalities well, I applaud you for that. Not to mention it flowed really well, and like I said, just seemed so real. Although you didn't use many adjectives that would create vivid imagery by English standards, I could easily picture every moment, and it was wonderful.

I'm going to stop rambling now, but yes, I thoroughly enjoyed this.

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writtendlessly July 11 2011, 03:38:53 UTC
aww thank you so much! "realistic" is the best compliment i can get, honestly, and it means a lot to me! portraying each member was a struggle for me but i'm glad it came off well! :)

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relevant icon is relevant! ^^ sweetshisus July 11 2011, 16:48:57 UTC
There are times when Soohyun looks in the mirror and thinks he'd give up everything, even his voice, just to be as beautiful as Kiseop is.
sobs omg this is just. This is so spot-on considering what we know about Soo. It's also so depressing ;_____; Poor baby, you're beautiful! You should know that.

Kiseop's favorite transformation is when Eli slides out of his wild jokester persona like a jacket and allows the softer, quieter side of himself to show-much like putting on a worn-in hoodie after a long day.
I love this simile so much, because I like to think of Eli this way, too, like he's comfortable and accessible. And way to go with continuing to use it throughout.

Eli knows that AJ wants nothing more than to taint that innocent character, to stare directly into the sun and attempt to cast his shadow over it. Eli can relate-he's wanted to do the same since the moment he saw Kevin.
odg the Elvin is shipping itself.

when AJ watches him for too long, he can see the boy trying so hard not to get lost.omg creys I always imagined Hoon ( ... )

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Re: relevant icon is relevant! ^^ writtendlessly July 12 2011, 19:52:45 UTC
omg okay imma try to just reply in order of stuff you said~ also in bullet point form

-soo ;~; my flawless prince eriuugir idk sooseop fascinates me because i think they both would just envy each other idk
-"comfortable and accessible" omg yes there you go again describing things better than i can! but idk i love writing eli~
-kekekeke always gotta have my elivin hints
-:3 ty idk writing hoon was so hard but i just imagine it being like an only child adapting to being with other kids or something
-yeah idk i tried to do it from hoon's pov rather than the actual trust, per se. like, clearly kevin has to work for things but someone like hoon would just see it differently, especially because kevin tries to remain so upbeat all the time
-DON'T KICK SUNGJONG!!!!

tysm bb <3 idk i think the problem was not only writing from dongho's pov but writing about soohyun, since i wanted to do both justice ( ... )

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jangboah July 12 2011, 02:13:40 UTC
sobs at how perfect this is

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writtendlessly July 12 2011, 10:07:26 UTC
sobs at how short and useless this comment is

no keke ty bb~~

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mikkatonic July 12 2011, 10:11:06 UTC
gdi I was gonna screencap all my tweets but I'm lazy.

but...

;~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~; EVERYTHING IS SO SPOT ON I LOVE IT SFM ;~~~; LIKE NEGL. ESPECIALLY SOOHYUN-->KISEOP, KISEOP--->ELI, KEVIN--->DONGHO, DONGHO--->KEVIN!! HJAHSDKJAHDJHASDKJAHS

/THROWS UNICORNS EVERYWHERE SKDJHSKJHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

WRITE MORE OR I SMASH. ;~~~~~~~~~~~~~; <333

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writtendlessly July 12 2011, 10:14:23 UTC
KEKEKE YOU'RE SILLY ILY TY TY TY <33333333333

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;A: ext_423216 July 12 2011, 10:23:43 UTC
sob and cries~~~ too much perfection~♥

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Re: ;A: writtendlessly July 12 2011, 19:48:16 UTC
keke thank you <3

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