U-Kiss - Ad infinitum
Title: Ad infinitum
Pairing: None
Rating: G
Summary: They're more than just seven men; they're a chain, a never-ending cycle, with each new piece being attached to the last so that they can never do anything but grow.
A/N: This is a character-study of sorts, mildly based on the relay talk that Super Junior did a long time ago. Each member reflects on ( Read more... )
Pairing: None
Rating: G
Summary: They're more than just seven men; they're a chain, a never-ending cycle, with each new piece being attached to the last so that they can never do anything but grow.
A/N: This is a character-study of sorts, mildly based on the relay talk that Super Junior did a long time ago. Each member reflects on ( Read more... )
sobs omg this is just. This is so spot-on considering what we know about Soo. It's also so depressing ;_____; Poor baby, you're beautiful! You should know that.
Kiseop's favorite transformation is when Eli slides out of his wild jokester persona like a jacket and allows the softer, quieter side of himself to show-much like putting on a worn-in hoodie after a long day.
I love this simile so much, because I like to think of Eli this way, too, like he's comfortable and accessible. And way to go with continuing to use it throughout.
Eli knows that AJ wants nothing more than to taint that innocent character, to stare directly into the sun and attempt to cast his shadow over it. Eli can relate-he's wanted to do the same since the moment he saw Kevin.
odg the Elvin is shipping itself.
when AJ watches him for too long, he can see the boy trying so hard not to get lost.
omg creys I always imagined Hoon like that, like he has no idea what to do with myself and how. A++++++, Shara, on this.
but he knows the member changes hit Kevin the hardest and whether the other members talk about it or not, he knows it's because Kevin had never really lost anything important to him before.
Wow, I never really thought of Kevin this way, but it is pretty much true. He does seem to get things easily though of course, he works at it just as much as everyone else. I totally love this angle that Hoon's coming from, though.
and yet, he's the same boy that cries into Kevin's shoulder on the nights when his homesickness gets to be too much for him to handle.
FLIPPING TABLES THROWING UNICORNS KICKING SUNGJONGS WAE WAE WAE GEURAE WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAE. THIS IS SO SAD. ;~~~~~~~~~~~;
Okay, so I know you were worried about writing Dongho the wrong way, and I have to tell you, what in the fuck were you worried about, it is perfect and glorious and rainbows okay. I can totally see Dongho trying hard to sympathize with how Soohyun feels even though he really doesn't get it, and I can see Dongho thinking of U-Kiss as a rock for Soohyun to rely on in times of trouble. I almost wonder if you want to add in a bit more about how Dongho envies Soohyun's determination to get better at something he already excels at, because Dongho is seemingly confident but in reality is probably really insecure about his singing/rapping skills and wishes he had the drive to want to be better. I don't know if that made sense :|
Btw, if you still need a beta, I'm here!!!! ^__^
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-soo ;~; my flawless prince eriuugir idk sooseop fascinates me because i think they both would just envy each other idk
-"comfortable and accessible" omg yes there you go again describing things better than i can! but idk i love writing eli~
-kekekeke always gotta have my elivin hints
-:3 ty idk writing hoon was so hard but i just imagine it being like an only child adapting to being with other kids or something
-yeah idk i tried to do it from hoon's pov rather than the actual trust, per se. like, clearly kevin has to work for things but someone like hoon would just see it differently, especially because kevin tries to remain so upbeat all the time
-DON'T KICK SUNGJONG!!!!
tysm bb <3 idk i think the problem was not only writing from dongho's pov but writing about soohyun, since i wanted to do both justice.
ty for this whole comment it was beautiful!!!!
and keke ty bb this is already up but if i have stuff to beta in the future which i inevitably will, i'll let you know~
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