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The Long Way There (Chapter One)

Feb 09, 2009 04:59

Title: “The Long Way There (Chapter One ( Read more... )

todae, tori, chaptered, gdyb, fanfiction[longwaythere]

Comments 43

orenjimaru February 9 2009, 14:10:57 UTC

Omo, Se7en as a gangster (who has a soft spot for his cousin, but still) = Win. Hahaa
And Ri joins the party! :D Why is Dae the only one who's got himself a bit of normality around here? LOL

Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!
xx

written_affair February 9 2009, 22:15:22 UTC

JiYong will turn out pretty normal I think >.> if not a bit emo XD

orenjimaru February 9 2009, 22:44:43 UTC

Ahh the new emo kid in school eh, wanna see what happens to him :)
(And why do I get the feeling that Dae is going to be the one to unite the bunch? :D)
Like I said, cant wait for the next part!
xx

written_affair February 10 2009, 10:00:45 UTC

I think you have a general gist of what I have planned for DaeDae XD

But sometimes when I start writing, weird things happen and nothing ever goes according to plan XD

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playitdirty February 9 2009, 14:25:56 UTC

Oddly, I had a feeling that it would be Se7en beating Top up when I saw the word 'wifebeater'... lol XD.
Anyway, so that was how they met each other. & Daesung, lol, sucha helpful boy XD.
& man, Top & Ri ARE disturbed boys. Dae might be the only sane one here =3

Looking forward for the next chapter, dear. Update soon! :D

written_affair February 9 2009, 22:16:21 UTC

After watching Se7en's Japanese "I wanna" MV... I can never look at a wifebeater without getting aroused

XD

raid_kun February 9 2009, 14:31:49 UTC

THE LACK OF BAE LOVE MAKES ME SAD. D:

But it's ok, this chapter was still just about the most amazing thing I've read today. *feels oddly gangsta suddenly*

WRITE MOAR NAO PRS. <3

written_affair February 9 2009, 22:16:57 UTC

Next chapter will start with Bae. ^-^

I think >.>

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written_affair February 9 2009, 22:18:14 UTC

I think I'm going to go forward before I start going back. I have to find a time sensitive moment in the story where they can talk about each others past openly.

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written_affair February 10 2009, 22:26:16 UTC

I dunno how you got through so many chapters in so many various different fics. I adore you.

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gypsy_sonata February 9 2009, 19:31:25 UTC

Gangster Se7en is total love!

I've been enjoying the story so far.

Totally sucks that you lost your original work. I've had that happen to me before and its no fun.

written_affair February 9 2009, 22:18:36 UTC

Yeah, it was no fun at all ._.