The Long Way There (Chapter One)

[written_affair]

Title: “The Long Way There (Chapter One

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[orenjimaru]

Omo, Se7en as a gangster (who has a soft spot for his cousin, but still) = Win. Hahaa
And Ri joins the party! :D Why is Dae the only one who's got himself a bit of normality around here? LOL

Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!
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[written_affair]

JiYong will turn out pretty normal I think >.> if not a bit emo XD

[orenjimaru]

Ahh the new emo kid in school eh, wanna see what happens to him :)
(And why do I get the feeling that Dae is going to be the one to unite the bunch? :D)
Like I said, cant wait for the next part!
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[written_affair]

I think you have a general gist of what I have planned for DaeDae XD

But sometimes when I start writing, weird things happen and nothing ever goes according to plan XD

[orenjimaru]

Haha yay me XDD

I know what you mean :O
I've had my writing disappear on me, get jumbled beyond belief, and sometimes I find myself rambling on mindlessly so I have to delete and edit like pages of work. *dies*
Hope nothing like that happens to your fic cos I'm enjoying it too much *fingers crossed*
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[written_affair]

For me, unless I focus, I can't put together coherent sentences. I try to jam too much information in one breath. Lol it's cause I'm OCD

[orenjimaru]

I try to jam too much information in one breath.
I'm totally the same way T_________T;;;
And then my fic comes out looking like one whole bunch of nonsense typed in a single paragraph. SAD, RLY. *sighs*
(Which reminds me, I'm supposed to be writing one right about now, aiish.)
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[written_affair]

Good luck writing your fic. Let me know when your done so I can read.

[orenjimaru]

Thanks, and I will do! :D
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