the heart hoards its thorns

[kallistei]

Title: the heart hoards its thorns
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho
Rating: PG
Summary: Just because you’ve had enough / doesn’t mean you wanted too much.
Author's Notes: For sleepish. Title and summary from 'Poem Without Forgiveness' by Dean Young.

Comments

[lovelykitten8]

ending sentence is a killer it hurt me deep

[kallistei]

Mm, I'm sorry.

[shinchul303]

I'd like to just say I'm weak tonight, and everything I read is getting to me.

But this is so tragic and sad, and possibly real (which makes it worse).

All that aside? PERFECTLY written. Stellar prose.

It's interesting to see Yunho as the supplicant and Jaejoong the rejector...

Not the usual fandom seme/uke.

So Sad. And, finally, Yunho truly IS the younger one.

Sometimes truth hurts.

Tough love?

[kallistei]

Thank you. I'm... really not fond of seme/uke tropes, anyway, which is probably why this reads differently.

[faricsyung]

thanks for this rare one-sided!Yunho for a change. *applauds*
amazingly heart-aching. T-T

[kallistei]

Thank you.

[sleepish]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH. ♥

sobs currently braindead after long day but i will be back with a legit comment.

[kallistei]

♥ Waiting!

[sleepish]

okay here we go!

i don't know if i told you when you first showed me but i am in love with the heart gift-giving idea. it stings, really hard, and yes i totally like it. THAT ENTIRE SECOND PARAGRAPH. oh yunho. :(

Yunho has to fight down the urge to slap his hand over Jaejoong's mouth so he won't have to hear the rest.

ow. :(

and jaejoong's response, with the He makes the offer like he expects Yunho to be grateful made me wince for real. ahhhh. and yunho putting jaejoong ahead of himself and the denial that runs through the entire piece and slkfjsfssfsmcsd.

thank you shay. :( ♥♥♥

[kallistei]

I feel that musing Pikachu is not the right icon for this context...

But I am really glad you liked it. This one came out... weird.

[scribblemusic]

Beautifully written.

Poor Yunho... =(

[kallistei]

Thank you. :(