music from a farther room

Jan 11, 2008 17:42

Title: music from a farther room
Character/Pairing: Yoochun (Jaejoong/Yunho/Yoochun)
Rating: G
Summary: AU. "The last thing Yoochun sees is the door slipping shut, the reflection of his own face in the glass falling towards him; then he knows nothing."
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p: jaejoong/yunho/yoochun, c: yoochun, f: dbsk

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clicheterms January 12 2008, 08:53:25 UTC
O_________O WHUT. SO INTRIGUING PLEASE CONTINUE DDD8

<3 tiffo

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kallistei January 12 2008, 14:26:12 UTC
If/when Yoochun starts talking to me again! ;)

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miyun January 12 2008, 10:45:15 UTC
So sad! Love it. You've provided enough that I can see what sort of world they were in. Again, love it. ^^

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kallistei January 12 2008, 14:26:32 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

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machine_of_july January 13 2008, 06:45:12 UTC
WHAT A CREEPY SCENARIO.

Yoochun ;___;

You're amazing? Can I be one of the annoying people who nags for more of this fic too 8DDDDD?

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kallistei January 13 2008, 14:48:07 UTC
Heee. Sure, I'll add you to the list.

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ranalore January 13 2008, 22:06:25 UTC
Awesome, awesome setup. I especially love that Yunho is the scientist and Jaejoong the soldier, because that strikes me as right, yet not how it'd usually be done.

Now I'm all gleefully anticipating how Changmin and Junsu fit in to this.

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kallistei January 13 2008, 22:09:00 UTC
I, um. May have figured out where they fit in this morning. But if I write this properly, it's going to be long. Are you up for betaing something that will probably need a lot of beating into shape?

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ranalore January 14 2008, 03:49:53 UTC
Depends on what the timing is, to be honest. I'd love to just say yes, and certainly I can read it and give you input, but a thorough beta requires focus, and I'm not sure how much of that I'll have when. Have you started work on it?

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kallistei January 14 2008, 04:12:44 UTC
Started yes. Got very far, no. And I'm not the world's fastest writer, or very good with finishing long things. So it may all be a theoretical question, especially with how busy my year is likely to be. I can always make a collaborator on google docs, though, so you can look over it when you have a minute and leave me a note if there's anything major you think needs fixing as I go.

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rishaxstar January 15 2008, 15:02:19 UTC
heartbreakingly beautiful.

the world, this world is stark and beautiful in the absence of others: it is true that yoochun is 'alone', but there is the promise of something else - he is a man displaced from five centuries past, what is his place, his purpose in the world that he woke up to?

echoing the call for a sequel, or perhaps a short continuation, if you can manage it.

♥ you make me love you more. :DDD

-ianinna

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kallistei January 16 2008, 00:37:02 UTC
Heh. The story now stands at almost 3000 words, with at least two major scenes still unstarted. *headdesk*

&hearts Thank youuuu :D

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