fic- "Time Heals" (NC-17, Complete, SGA, Ties that Bind) Part 3

[writinginct]

Time Heals by CJ aka WritinginCT  (NC-17)

Fandom: Stargate SGA
Pairing: multiple m/m (primarily OC's), m/f, m/m/f
Warnings: rape/ torture recovery (non graphic descriptions of the assault itself)
Categories: Drama, romance, friendship, family, BDsM.
Disclaimer: I don't own the recognizable characters I'm just inspired by them.
Status: Complete 6/

Comments

[averzierlia]

I know I shouldn't comment on this part, I should wait until the end, but jesus. Some of the lines you wrote in this part made me lose it hardcore, my friend on yim had to deal with me copy/pasting sections and cackling.

♥

[writinginct]

lol I'm hoping one of them that made you laugh is Ramon's muttering about picking a fight with eight Marines - it's one of my favorites :) Thanks for the feedback!!

[averzierlia]

god yes, I want to icon that but I suck epically at making text icons. Currently trying to bribe someone into making it.

[gail19]

Wait to comment? Oh no. My feeling is that if comments are not desired / acceptable then that function would have been blocked. And it wasn't so....

As much as I adore having the opportunity to read completed stories at one time, I miss the chance to comment after each section when it isn't available. If I have to wait to the end I may forget to mention some part that I found especially good.

The gift giving leading to the dinner date was one of those moments. The goodness spreading out from the main characters is yummy. The fight and follow up was fun to read.

[writinginct]

I'm with you there, I forget a lot of little things I like about a long story if I wait til the end to comment.

I love how Carmine subtly (but without being indiscreet) nudged Scalfani about telling Anka she was pretty. Carmine is just a hopeless romantic ^.^