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Fanfic - SPN: Owned (Sam/Dean)

Nov 07, 2006 00:07

Title: Owned [Evil!Sammy Universe]
Author: eboniorchid
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Prompt: 012. Broken. For 100moods, challenge table here. As well as: 047. Writer's Choice. For 50kinkyways, challenge table here.
Word Count: 1085 words exactly.
Rating: NC-17 for language, sexuality, and violence.
Warnings/Spoilers: Angst! Dark! Future ( Read more... )

genre: future!fic, genre: dark!fic, challenge: 100moods, character: dean winchester, fandom: supernatural, genre: au!fic, character: sam winchester, pairing: sam/dean, category: slash, rating: nc-17, !fanfic, genre: angst!fic, genre: smut!fic, kink: manipulation, genre: kink!fic, kink: dubious-consent, challenge: mini_nanowrimo, genre: wincest!fic, warning: violence, challenge: 50kinkyways, fic universe: spn evil!sammy, genre: apocalypse!fic, challenge: nanowrimo

Comments 29

broken_lullaby November 7 2006, 20:33:10 UTC

Whoa.

That's actually quite scary. I love this world you've set up, and I do hope that you will continue with it.

I'm not crying...yet. *sniffs*

writingbyebonio November 8 2006, 03:30:49 UTC

Thank you!

Yeah, Sammy's Whole New World is just as scary as he is. *shivers*

Aww! *pets* Poor you, poor Dean!

roguemouse November 7 2006, 20:47:58 UTC

As I - barely - managed to say before: great. Absolutely amazing.
And now excuse me. I have to go to my sap-corner

*meep*

writingbyebonio November 8 2006, 03:40:43 UTC

Oh thank you so much!

I'm so glad you liked it.

*hugs*

Beautiful! trias_cube December 23 2006, 04:13:03 UTC

Very nicely done. There is so much Dean suffering. So emotional. I liked the concept of Sam making Dean repeat that phrase over and over.

Re: Beautiful! writingbyebonio December 23 2006, 04:31:10 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like this piece. And yeah, the repeating of the pseudo-mantra is key here and will crop up again at various points in this universe, I'm sure. Thanks for commenting. And welcome to LJ!

dendritejungle March 25 2007, 05:00:23 UTC

I...god. *chokes*

Dean's believable defiance...the sexual pleasure-pain manipulation (also very believable as a mechanism of controlling Dean, from what we know of him. Sam does know his slave well)...Sam forcing control on him, forcing the words out of him, again and again and again... (...and then they slow danced, hee! *ahem* Sorry, needed a tension breaker.)

This is so claustrophobic and intense and visceral. It's almost like the opposite of Letters to me, in terms of style (not surprising, perhaps, since it also seems very stylistically similar to Bury the Hunter): short timeframe, upcloserightthere in Dean's mind, with his frustration and pain spelled out implicitly and explicitly, and we're right there with him, our hearts being squeezed along with his.

I don't know if you've ever seen the movie or play Closetland? (Now that could really have used some warning tags. Jeezus. I thought I was renting an action flick.) It has a very similar tone: claustrophobically close, intense psychological and physical torture, that you just ( ... )

writingbyebonio March 26 2007, 07:36:59 UTC

Thank you very much for such comprehensive feedback! I've never seen Closetland, but it sounds intriguing. I'm glad the style of this piece had an emotional impact on you.

neeuqdrazil December 17 2007, 15:16:57 UTC

*is teary*

I'd read this before, but I hadn't really gotten it until now.

writingbyebonio December 17 2007, 15:23:08 UTC

Awww, yeah, it's rough, not pretty. *hugs you tight*