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dragojustine June 10 2008, 17:49:43 UTC
JESUS.

I mean, just... GUH... and... all sorts of other noises of extreme arousal.

Holy shit, woman.

I mean, there's a lot going on here emotionally that's awesome- those moments when it seems like Sam might actually be caring and protective, the way Dean grasps so frantically at those moments- your description of that mind-juju from the guard- I think, if I was a better person, I would be leaving feedback about all that stuff.

Instead, you know, that was so hot I can't think. And it leaves me just gobsmacked with this mix of stuff I KNOW I find hot, just damned hot IRL (with, uh, shitloads of caveats about consent and negotiation and care and... LOTS of caveats, obviously), and stuff that I know I find hot but in fiction only, and stuff that I didn't expect to find hot AT ALL except that then you write it and it just hits me like a freight train and I'm left with my jaw hanging open going "wait- that's hot too?!?"

I mean, yeah- ownership and begging and blowjobs, obviously, I'm so completely there. And needle play is hot in ( ... )

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writingbyebonio June 17 2008, 20:11:13 UTC
First off, it is always awesome to hear when readers find my stories hot enough to melt their seats. Just try to remember to breathe and drink plenty of water ( ... )

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idiot4dean June 10 2008, 17:50:22 UTC
If nothing else this verse is educational. I never knew people did that with medical needles. That made me cringe but as always you made everything work so well ( ... )

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writingbyebonio June 17 2008, 20:26:43 UTC
Educational. Yes. You're not the first to say that, but I do hope that readers interested in the world of RL kink will explore non-fic info in addition to works like these. Needle play, especially, was one of the kinks I imagined would be new to most readers, but it is a fascinating experience even more than a painful one, though it sounds really extreme ( ... )

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idiot4dean June 17 2008, 21:01:26 UTC
The woman who brought Dean's food had a conversation with him although she shouldn't but he didn't tell Sam. In the conversation he learnt things about the world now but never let on to Sam. Will Sam be upset when he finds out? Or will he use it to taunt Dean about his status?

Hugs

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writingbyebonio June 17 2008, 21:32:06 UTC
You are very observant! Who knows why Sam doesn't want Dean to know about the outside world, though? Maybe Sam will be upset if he finds out about the Dean-Merta conversation or maybe he won't care. Maybe he'll be just as mad at her for talking as he is at Dean. Guess we'll just have to wait and see. ;-)

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writingbyebonio June 17 2008, 20:31:59 UTC
Mmmm yeah. Sam shifts back and forth between harsh and gentle in a way that really messes with Dean (and, likely, readers). Dean's doing his best to keep his head together, but it's hard, ya know?

Glad you enjoyed this and there is always more on the way! :)

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writingbyebonio June 17 2008, 20:39:48 UTC
LOL! I do like my endings to affect readers, but I like all the parts of my stories to affect readers ( ... )

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dendritejungle June 19 2008, 22:26:22 UTC
The needles are creepy...I understand candle wax and cutting and even to some extent, burning, but needles are just...really creepy! Why do people like THAT of all things?

Hee! That's so interesting, because I personally find needleplay much easier to understand then cutting or burning! In, out you're done, very little permanent damage.

I actually wrote a post in April about its awesomeness. It's pretty explicit, just to warn you, and is locked, but I've friended you so you can read it if you're curious. Here.

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chaigrl2786 June 12 2008, 01:55:48 UTC
Thank you sooo much for the update. It was such a wonderful surprise and really made like...probably my whole week. LOL. It is just nice to know that you are still keeping up with it. Thanks again!

-ChaiGrl

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writingbyebonio June 17 2008, 20:41:32 UTC
No problem! I'm glad I could give you a bit of a grin! And don't worry about this 'verse disappearing or anything, I actually work on it all the time, I just don't like to post until I have a complete story ready.

Hope to see you around here again soon!

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