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trueshellz June 9 2008, 19:56:42 UTC
*sobs*
I really just want Dean to break down and Sam to soften up a bit
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writingbyebonio June 11 2008, 06:03:37 UTC
Oh no! *passes the tissues* The tension is tough, isn't it? Maybe if you wish hard enough your wish will come true! ;-)

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writingbyebonio June 11 2008, 06:07:23 UTC
Yeah. For such a practical person, his hopefulness is quite resilient even in this situation. We'll see how it weathers the rest of the storm, though. :)

It's always awesome to see regular readers come back again. I'm really glad that the 'verse still gives you a thrill!

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dirtyndusty June 10 2008, 00:10:22 UTC
Wonderful fic, again. Thank you for sharing ! I'm feeling kind of frustrated for Dean. Poor thing, whatever he tries to please Sam (or survive), it seems never quite enough. The Commander is a bitch.

And wow, needle play = major kink of mine. Simply beautiful.
I can remember only one fanfic with light needle play. It was in the LOTR fandom, an installment from Tyellas's excellent Ansereg verse : http://www.ansereg.com/birch_and_thorn.htm

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writingbyebonio June 11 2008, 06:10:14 UTC
Thank *you*! And yeah, Dean's having a rough time, isn't he? The Commander pushes him a lot, but Dean's a smart guy. I'm sure he'll figure something out. ;-)

Also? Glad I could put my finger on a kink button of yours and thanks so much for the link to that other fic. I don't know LOTR much, but I'm always keen to see how kink is used in other fics. :)

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vesuvianite June 10 2008, 04:13:36 UTC
Wow, I feel like I've been put through the wringer with poor Dean! That was intense.

And you know, I said, earlier, that I thought maybe you had abandoned this 'verse because it had been so long since you'd make an update. But, I realized, after I said that, that part of the reason for the lengthy stretch between installments is that you wait to have the complete story finished, before you post. And I like that. I prefer getting it all at one shot, whether than having the pieces eeked out, one at a time.

One editorial note, if you don't mind. When you say things like "give free rein" or "rein in" or "grab the reins" it should be spelled as "rein", not "reign". "Rein" is how you spell it for the reins on a horse, which, of course, is where all those expressions originate. "Reign" is the correct spelling when you're talking about a king or queen's reign.

Also, I caught one typo in this chapter:

It's sill not good enough, but maybe April isn't impossible.

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writingbyebonio June 11 2008, 06:15:43 UTC
Thank you! Glad it affected you! And you're right, I do prefer to wait until I have complete stories to post. It's a bit of a personal bias as a reader as well as in my writer role, though, so it's good to hear that y'all regular readers are a-okay with it. :)

Thanks for the editing suggestions, by the way. I believe they're all fixed now.

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mre_quecky June 10 2008, 15:07:22 UTC
Damn, holy shit! I loved this! All the tension and emotion, woah...
Loved each and every chap of it!

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writingbyebonio June 11 2008, 06:16:28 UTC
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it! I appreciate you coming back for more of this 'verse. :)

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mre_quecky June 11 2008, 08:59:58 UTC
Well, definitely! It still is my absolutely favourite verse!!!

Hm, although there are Phantisma's verses, which are very good as well...

But still, your verse is definitely on top of the list!

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writingbyebonio June 17 2008, 21:37:59 UTC
Awww, shucks! *blushes bashfully* Thank you!

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