Home, T +1, Originallilian_choJanuary 20 2008, 07:21:57 UTC
Pterry's Wintersmith (which I still need to finish) Chapter One: The Big Snow
T Prompt: Tray +1, 64 words
Gosh I'm actually writing original for this round. Will wonders ever cease =P This is a snippet from my epic long original slash story, "Ephemeral Creatures." G rating for this part.
Soft footsteps can be heard on the cave's earthen floor. A child, looking barely fifteen in human years, glanced around to make sure that none of his clan noticed him slipping in.
In his arms he was carrying a wooden tray with fresh fruits and berries, a simple offering for the feverish man within. Weak rays of sunlight cast shadows on his blond strands.
+1, U +2, Originallilian_choJanuary 20 2008, 07:42:55 UTC
Successfully completed T square, gained 1 point, moved 1 square to U square.
Character: Unkempt +2, 178 words
This is a snippet from my original slash story, "Ephemeral Creatures." G rating for this part. [ 1]
The clan had been unhappy when he brought the barely conscious man into their grove. As a rule, the Ephemerals stay away from humans from the Outside. Three centuries ago, there had been a horrible bloodshed in which the Outsiders almost succeeded in wiping out the Ephemerals from the face of the earth. The few dozens that had survived found this grove in the heart of the forest and cast earth bound protection on it. Since then, their descendants had isolated themselves from the Outside.
He looked at the delirious man lying on the raised bed. With disheveled hair sticking to his hot face, the man looked as helpless as he did when the boy found him earlier this afternoon. The stranger wore a shirt that was cool and smooth to the touch-the finest silk from a faraway land, grandmother had whispered. Did this man’s ancestors
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Home / M+2 / L&O:SVUtablyn24January 20 2008, 19:50:52 UTC
Title: Music, Cable and Conspiracy's Too Fandom: Law & Order: SVU Word count: 105 Prompt: Magic + 2 Total points: 2
"Oh oh it's magic!" "How can you listen to that crap?" Munch reached over to turn down the volume, still tapping away at the steering wheel. "Better than the stuff you listen to. Jiggy Wig. Check C Crunch ...." He was stopped short by the explosion of laughter coming from the right. "Jiggy Wig? Check C Crunch? We've been partners for two years now and you still can't name one rap artist can you?" "Artists? Hardly Finn." "Oh don't go there. Plus haven't you heard of MTV, Bet? "No cable. It's a government spying program that -" "Enough man, enough! I knew I should have stayed home."
PC (up) +6 / L&O:SVUtablyn24January 20 2008, 20:09:54 UTC
+2 to PC moving "up"
Title: The Most Innocent Fandom: Law & Order: SVU Word count: 139 Prompt: Sudden +1/Hurt +2/Reinforce +3 Total points: 8
It was the ones involving children that Elliot hated the most, the younger the child harder the hate was reinforced inside. Pure, small and innocent victims of the most horrible pain and unimagationable hurt that people ten times their age won't be able to handle. The children with tear stained faces, scars and bruises all over the skin over sudden lose of tempers from parents, grandparents, and so forth. Children often searching for love, real love. He tries to stay emotional dis attached from them, solves the cases, arrests the bastards guilty of the crimes, but he doesn't allow himself to sympathize to the point judgment starts to shake. A part of him fears if he did sit down and let it all sink into his soul, he'd never get up again and no one else could be saved.
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Chapter One: The Big Snow
T Prompt: Tray +1, 64 words
Gosh I'm actually writing original for this round. Will wonders ever cease =P
This is a snippet from my epic long original slash story, "Ephemeral Creatures." G rating for this part.
Soft footsteps can be heard on the cave's earthen floor. A child, looking barely fifteen in human years, glanced around to make sure that none of his clan noticed him slipping in.
In his arms he was carrying a wooden tray with fresh fruits and berries, a simple offering for the feverish man within. Weak rays of sunlight cast shadows on his blond strands.
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Character: Unkempt +2, 178 words
This is a snippet from my original slash story, "Ephemeral Creatures." G rating for this part. [ 1]
The clan had been unhappy when he brought the barely conscious man into their grove. As a rule, the Ephemerals stay away from humans from the Outside. Three centuries ago, there had been a horrible bloodshed in which the Outsiders almost succeeded in wiping out the Ephemerals from the face of the earth. The few dozens that had survived found this grove in the heart of the forest and cast earth bound protection on it. Since then, their descendants had isolated themselves from the Outside.
He looked at the delirious man lying on the raised bed. With disheveled hair sticking to his hot face, the man looked as helpless as he did when the boy found him earlier this afternoon. The stranger wore a shirt that was cool and smooth to the touch-the finest silk from a faraway land, grandmother had whispered. Did this man’s ancestors ( ... )
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Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Word count: 105
Prompt: Magic + 2
Total points: 2
"Oh oh it's magic!"
"How can you listen to that crap?" Munch reached over to turn down the volume, still tapping away at the steering wheel.
"Better than the stuff you listen to. Jiggy Wig. Check C Crunch ...." He was stopped short by the explosion of laughter coming from the right.
"Jiggy Wig? Check C Crunch? We've been partners for two years now and you still can't name one rap artist can you?"
"Artists? Hardly Finn."
"Oh don't go there. Plus haven't you heard of MTV, Bet?
"No cable. It's a government spying program that -"
"Enough man, enough! I knew I should have stayed home."
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Title: The Most Innocent
Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Word count: 139
Prompt: Sudden +1/Hurt +2/Reinforce +3
Total points: 8
It was the ones involving children that Elliot hated the most, the younger the child harder the hate was reinforced inside. Pure, small and innocent victims of the most horrible pain and unimagationable hurt that people ten times their age won't be able to handle. The children with tear stained faces, scars and bruises all over the skin over sudden lose of tempers from parents, grandparents, and so forth. Children often searching for love, real love. He tries to stay emotional dis attached from them, solves the cases, arrests the bastards guilty of the crimes, but he doesn't allow himself to sympathize to the point judgment starts to shake. A part of him fears if he did sit down and let it all sink into his soul, he'd never get up again and no one else could be saved.
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Title: Grocery Lines
Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Word count: 177
Prompt: Queue +3
Total points: 11 ( ... )
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