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Prompt #578 : Shoes and Shirt Required : "A Vision of a God" : MCU : Loki
Jan 08, 2015 21:34
Title: "A Vision of a God"
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fandom: marvel
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author: pony_express
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fandom: thor
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flowsoffire
January 14 2015, 07:17:15 UTC
Fun piece! I like ;)
Little typo: "Nothing screamed God than his usual dress.", you forgot "more" ;)
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pony_express
January 20 2015, 20:46:46 UTC
Aww thank you! :D
I've used than in place of like. But you're right, it makes no scene that way, I'll change it back to like. Thank you!
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flowsoffire
January 21 2015, 06:57:56 UTC
Anytime! :)
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Little typo: "Nothing screamed God than his usual dress.", you forgot "more" ;)
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I've used than in place of like. But you're right, it makes no scene that way, I'll change it back to like. Thank you!
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