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Stolen

Jun 04, 2011 14:59

Notes: Alan has been taken by Druitt. It is partly Eric's fault. Follows on from the bit where Eric confronts his boss about taking his daughter. She lets him know she knows about Alan. Eric freaks out. This happens.

Badly-hinted-at rape involved.

( Few more to go, if anyone's interested. )

viscount druitt, *kuroshitsuji: mafia, alan humphries, eric slingby

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petitefee24 June 4 2011, 14:37:02 UTC

WOOOOOOW

I'm soooo behind in reading your stuff... since i'm a little bit dissapoiintend o the canon right know and I'm traumatized by tenimyu boys... XDD

But I read 'Druitt' and i couldn't restrain myself....bt, is this the 2nd time he's captured? O.o

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petitefee24 June 4 2011, 14:43:19 UTC

Oh I love you.

Yeah I'm sick and I like Druitt being an asshole :D

Frist: zombies. Ok, we all need to brign food on the table but.... zombies. Honestly.

Second: it was Grell's return into the canon after soooo many years and it SUCKED. I'm a Lizzie supporter and knowing she can kicks butts didn't surprise me but Ciels is being more patetic than usual, I miss the Noah'sCircusArc!Sebastian and.... even though there were 2 chapters... it was like I read half of lame chapter -.-*

And more Druitt? Today's my b*day :D:D:D

write_rewrite June 4 2011, 14:45:10 UTC

xDD I'm more interested in having Grell and Alan square off against each other. Druitt's greatest asset is that he has an injured and vulnerable Alan - as much as what he's doing is wrong, he's blending kindness and cruelty with him, so Alan's not really sure if he's good or bad.

IF they leave him there for too long, it could turn into a kind of Stockholm Syndrome, with Alan going rogue and attacking his former partner and boss.

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hanakotoba_fic June 4 2011, 17:29:58 UTC

WOOOOOW

I like how this ends, for some reason, with the "He might break now" line so soon after the "...I won't break" dialogue.

Mmm, happy happy fun times. I'm sorry Alan, I really am, we torture you so, but we really do want a happy ending for you. Trust us. x.x (Which now I have this fourth-wall breaking exercise in my head and Alan just sulking at author-me or author-you for Some Reason. This might be one of the reasons.)

write_rewrite June 4 2011, 17:39:15 UTC

Wriiiiiiite it!

I've had a lovely image of the Reapers as a vampire royal family. Makes more sense if you can see into my brain.

And I am glad you like it <3.