Stolen

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Notes: Alan has been taken by Druitt. It is partly Eric's fault. Follows on from the bit where Eric confronts his boss about taking his daughter. She lets him know she knows about Alan. Eric freaks out. This happens.

Badly-hinted-at rape involved.

Comments

[petitefee24]

WOOOOOOW

I'm soooo behind in reading your stuff... since i'm a little bit dissapoiintend o the canon right know and I'm traumatized by tenimyu boys... XDD

But I read 'Druitt' and i couldn't restrain myself....bt, is this the 2nd time he's captured? O.o

[petitefee24]

Oh I love you.

Yeah I'm sick and I like Druitt being an asshole :D

Frist: zombies. Ok, we all need to brign food on the table but.... zombies. Honestly.

Second: it was Grell's return into the canon after soooo many years and it SUCKED. I'm a Lizzie supporter and knowing she can kicks butts didn't surprise me but Ciels is being more patetic than usual, I miss the Noah'sCircusArc!Sebastian and.... even though there were 2 chapters... it was like I read half of lame chapter -.-*

And more Druitt? Today's my b*day :D:D:D

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xDD I'm more interested in having Grell and Alan square off against each other. Druitt's greatest asset is that he has an injured and vulnerable Alan - as much as what he's doing is wrong, he's blending kindness and cruelty with him, so Alan's not really sure if he's good or bad.

IF they leave him there for too long, it could turn into a kind of Stockholm Syndrome, with Alan going rogue and attacking his former partner and boss.

[petitefee24]

Yeha yeha I KNOOOOOOW.

That's why I love you, you totally get that kind of cruelty and put it into words beautifully.

You're plots are always very interesting :D :D

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Sort of wish I'd written this with original characters from the start, though; I'm a bit apprehensive about drafting original characters for it. Seems sort of... eh.

But I'm glad you like my plots <3

aaaand thank you! *loves back*

And dawww Prince of Tennis. I... have never watched it. Maybe after I finish NCIS, I'll give it a try.

[petitefee24]

Niether do I. I read the manga (much better in my opinion).... and the musicals... oh the musicials....

[write_rewrite]

Ooh,I see.

And, on the manga, I agree with you entirely - but I do think that Yana has a good sense of pacing. I dunno, I guess I'm not too keen on seeing the end of the manga.

[write_rewrite]

AND.

Sorryforgottocomment.

Ciel is being quite pathetic, but the zombies just make me d'awww. I've been planning a bit with ERic and Alan and the zombies...

Although I don't mind the Zombie Arc so much, it is a bit ... predictable, I suppose

[petitefee24]

ZOMBIIIIIEEEES

¬¬* And I'm getting bored of waiting to know why the Phantomhive were murdered, that Undertaker is indeed a shinigami, why is that he was tehre when the P. were murdered, and who are the culprits of Ciel's captiveness.... Toboso-sensei need to start wrapping thing a little bit, there's sooo much loseties that's making the story go toooo slow!!

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Yep, same guy, too.

Grell's going to tease him about it,if Alan survives this second time.

And d'awww, that's got you mad at the canon? And ... what are tenimyu boys?

[petitefee24]

Yeah I knew it was you, answer above.

And Prince Of tennis Musical (TeniMyu) boys.... *drools* They're my current doom. And since they have tons of plays (individual or a few one with another few ones), my computer is suffering.