二日 ~48 Hours~ Chapter 1: The First Night

[write_my_dreams]

I'm horribly jetlagged, not sleeping well, and it's been tricky to read through this. I apologize for any lapses in quality or ypos. My brain starts to switch off by 4 pm/16:00 because I'm wide awake around 4 am. Ah, jetlag. How I hate you.

Title: 二日 ~48 Hours~ (Chapter 1: The First Night)
Author: write_my_dreams
Pairing: Hide-Zou x Tsunehito, Asagi x Ruiza

Comments

[dead_vortex]

Okay, how has no-one commented on this? This is… Awesome. I think you've really captured the mood of their relationship, and the fountain part was just too cute! I can honestly imagine a drunk Hide-Zou. XD But a drunk Tsune? He seems too… decadent to order shots. Either way, I'm really looking forward to Part Two.

(P.S. I actually finished this yesterday, but my lazy ass only meant I wrote a comment at 12:30 on Monday. So I suppose it's two days now. Sorry!)

[write_my_dreams]

Not sure but it's not exactly motivating to work on chapter two. But thank you, I'm happy to read that you enjoyed it. The fountain part was so fun. Drunk Hide-Zou is an epic visual. Shots are utterly vile but in the case of a stalker ex, I can see why he'd want something strong.

Oh you did? Ah well, it's not like there's an influx of comments

[dead_vortex]

Oh, I know - don't worry about it. ;-; I've found that a large amount of readers tend not to leave comments, so you probably have some others regardless.

Lol, I'm just going off the video of him getting drunk on Polish beer on the European DVD. XD Tsune is in the background laughing, and you can hear Asagi as well. And yes - I absolutely hate the taste of alcohol, so I can only imagine what something so concentrated as shots taste like.

LiveJournal seems pretty dead at the moment for me as well - maybe you just posted at the wrong time. ._. I'll definitely read Chapter Two, either way, but don't feel like I'm pressuring you to get it done or anything.

[write_my_dreams]

I've noticed that *sigh* Maybe but if you're the only person that's going to comment, I might as well just email you the draft of Chapter 2 and move on to other projects.

That sounds adorable. I'll have to watch that and check it out. Aww, cute. Oh you do? I used to be the same... then I tried other alcohol that I actually liked lol. Hard cider is my favorite to drink. Shots are unpleasant because they're so strong. Also... do not ever drink a jägermeister. It is vile. Utterly vile.

It is really dead. I don't know, it seems like whenever I post it's the wrong time lol. Thank you

[numbercut3]

I really liked this one. Not too serious to read. I hope to read the second chapter too. :)

I'm sorry for my lack of smart things to say. I'm not good at commenting fanfics since I don't really read them. Anyway wanted to let you know I read your fics although I may not comment much. And I'm sure there are more users who reads your fics but for a reason or another don't leave a comment.

[write_my_dreams]

I'm glad you liked it :)

Thank you for taking the time to comment and explain. My issue is always that if I don't see comments, I assume people aren't reading my fics. Which makes me not want to write them.

[numbercut3]

I always struggle with comments. It would be easy if i could just click a button that tells you I read the entry. XD

Anyway, now on i try to comment on every fic i read from you (though i mainly read only D fics with Tsune ^^').

[write_my_dreams]

Sometimes they're difficult. That wouldn't make the author happy XD

Thank you. I only have one Asagi x Ruiza fic left to do then it's all Asagi x Tsune from here on out. My preferred pairing :)

[kozisakurai]

I loved it!!! (I didn't have time earlier to read it, sorry ;_; but I did it now. 3:10 am xD

[write_my_dreams]

(I know you're busy with life so I understand if it takes you a while to read something. Omg, nice XD)
I do too! It sounds so pretty. Haha that's awesome.

lol of course you would. Hide-Zou says he's very unlucky
Thank you. I feel your pain on wanting the time to read without distractions. I need to catch up on Ruu's journal... I think you guys were posting when I was super stressed with school so didn't have the brain power to read for fun. I usually just write for fun but if it's a multi-chapter work there's the pressure to continue because my audience is waiting for it. That's understandable. I wish I could read them too :(
*hugs*

[write_my_dreams]

I'm glad it turned out well. Haha yes they do. They're good at that

Not a pairing I'm super into writing but they're cute. I based their chemistry off the way I saw them live. He already knows he likes Tsune and wants to get to know him better. I liked the 'no fussing' too. I think Tsunehito is saying he's had enough of fussy muses lol

I know, the poor man is traumatized. Asagi knows how skimpy his costume is and that he's caught XD

Thank you :)