tell me if this doesn't make sense!
ooh this might shed so light on this piece if you want it. "but i remember counting days down 'til the year could be done so i could scatter all my notebooks on the prep school lawn and disappear again into a summer's bliss of staying out sleeping in and getting drunk with my friends" - bright eyes (loose
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only sisterhood could have driven us
to stand shameless and bare-chested
in a circle comparing size and sag
as if we were testing melons
That said, I don't think the first and last are quite as strong. I think "tattooed with a heart for every sister / so we may carry them permanently" says too much. The first stanza, on the other hand, is too vague. It is different from the rest of the poem.
Are you planning on reading it?
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I may perform it. I'm worried about it being too specific to my own experience though.
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As far as the why... I went to board school;there was a crap-load of history and tradition. I loved it and made some of the best friends ever.
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