Should I change anything?

[felixamatrix]

“The Ogre’s Dessert “

The parts I eat last I like them best
Are the lady fingers
For they are better than the rest

(of the lady)

Comments

[windymay]

It's perfect don't change a thing.

[artofange]

Haha, not at all. This brought me joy!

[felixamatrix]

Thanks! You guys are great!