I hope that you are going to update quickly. What an ending. Loved that Jen has taken to being a grandmother so willingly and I laughed at Brian using so much sugar. If Justin doesn't understand Brian's diet what chance do the rest of us have? By the way, I'm sending this comment from iPad. I'm off to press some icons now.
LOL I'm already about half-way through the next chapter, but it's a bit disjointed at the moment so it might take me a while to sort it out.
LOL about the iPad. I have to admit that icon driven programs drive me nuts. I can never work out what the icon is supposed to represent. Give me a simple text box that says "mail" anyday rather than something that might be an envelope, or might be equally well be something that represents puzzles or folders or who knows what.
I guess I kind of figure that over the years it's been fairly well established that kids do better when they move on from just reacting to the pretty pictures and actually learn to read. LOL
I actually have the next chapter already mapped out and most of the Joanie stuff already written, but the rest is in bits and pieces and kind of disjointed right now, so it's going to have to wait till I find time to bring it all together.
That was such a beautiful moment between Brian and Jen. I love Jen! It is so much fun to hear how she fixed up a playroom for Gus and about Brian and Justing getting the house and loft ready.
Thank you. I can totally see Jenn being very grateful that Justin is having the opportunity of being a father, even if he's not the biological parent. And that she would want to support him to the hilt in that, which includes taking to heart her role as grandma.
Next chapter is well on the way, just need to pull it together. Might be a few surprises - especially about why Joanie has turned up on the doorstep. *evil grin*
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Loved that Jen has taken to being a grandmother so willingly and I laughed at Brian using so much sugar. If Justin doesn't understand Brian's diet what chance do the rest of us have?
By the way, I'm sending this comment from iPad. I'm off to press some icons now.
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LOL about the iPad. I have to admit that icon driven programs drive me nuts. I can never work out what the icon is supposed to represent. Give me a simple text box that says "mail" anyday rather than something that might be an envelope, or might be equally well be something that represents puzzles or folders or who knows what.
I guess I kind of figure that over the years it's been fairly well established that kids do better when they move on from just reacting to the pretty pictures and actually learn to read. LOL
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You realise that now you need to update, like, yesterday, right? LOL
That first scene was so awesome and so ... beautifully written and with keen eye for the things that matter. Bravo!
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And those reasons may surprise everyone - even Joan herself, maybe.
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I actually have the next chapter already mapped out and most of the Joanie stuff already written, but the rest is in bits and pieces and kind of disjointed right now, so it's going to have to wait till I find time to bring it all together.
Glad you liked the grandma jenn scene. Thank you.
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I love this story. I can't wait to see the confrontation between Brian and Joan.
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Next chapter is well under way. It just needs to be pulled together. Could even be next weekend if all goes well.
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Wait, JOAN?!
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As for Joan ... hehehehehe!
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Grandma Jenn, good. Grandma Joan, bad.
Please update soon...
Great chapter.
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