Yay Drabble!
This is my first-ever BBM fan-anything. It turned out to be a drabble-esque (not entirely strict to drabble form) piece of writing. Criticism is welcome and feedback is great!
Angst level- Orange (I won't write any angstier than this.)
Ennis stared at the crimson ink on the card as it were an unfriendly acquaintance, a mix of fear and aggression. Cigarette- smoke curling - ignored in the heavily used plastic ashtray. Light filters in through the nicotine-discolored blinds onto the Formica tabletop in his cramped trailer.
The hands of guilt and remorse- fighting sorrow to get their own handhold on Ennis's heart- ultimately settling for a tight hug around his chest forcing him to breathe laboriously. Why am I still breathing, who do I have to live for? He felt the breath of someone whispering in his ear, "Me."
Ennis glanced around the empty interior.
Angst level- Orange (I won't write any angstier than this.)
Ennis stared at the crimson ink on the card as it were an unfriendly acquaintance, a mix of fear and aggression. Cigarette- smoke curling - ignored in the heavily used plastic ashtray. Light filters in through the nicotine-discolored blinds onto the Formica tabletop in his cramped trailer.
The hands of guilt and remorse- fighting sorrow to get their own handhold on Ennis's heart- ultimately settling for a tight hug around his chest forcing him to breathe laboriously. Why am I still breathing, who do I have to live for? He felt the breath of someone whispering in his ear, "Me."
Ennis glanced around the empty interior.