Yay Drabble!

[dogsdontknowme]

This is my first-ever BBM fan-anything. It turned out to be a drabble-esque (not entirely strict to drabble form) piece of writing. Criticism is welcome and feedback is great!

Angst level- Orange (I won't write any angstier than this.)

Ennis stared at the crimson ink on the card as it were an unfriendly acquaintance, a mix of fear and aggression

Comments

[big_heart_june]

Oh God ~ I'm so impressed by this! This is just so brilliantly tragic :( It makes my heart ache. You've got it all so right and I can feel Ennis's pain and utter desperation :( Oh man ..... :(

Please say you'll write more. I adore drabbles and I LOVED this one :)

[dogsdontknowme]

Aww, shucks. *blushes* Thank you for your kind words. I will be writing more soon.

~matt

OH MY GOD!!!

[anonymous]

This small piece of work just tore my heart out, so much pain that Ennis has to live with. Thank you........

Re: OH MY GOD!!!

[dogsdontknowme]

Err, ripped your heart out? You're welcome/ I'm sorry.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

~matt

[flowrs4ophelia]

Ooooh that's very haunting.

[dogsdontknowme]

Thanks for your comment.

[anonymous]

saaaaaaaaaaaaaad ... sad sad sad ..... i liked the movie ... and this is good ... shoot .......... sad ..... frick

thanks ski

[dogsdontknowme]

Thank you Ski.

[coffeecat33]

Nice work, Matt. Short and expressive. Hope you keep it up.
cc33 / Leslie K.

[dogsdontknowme]

Thanks Les, hope your fic is working out too!

~matt