Fic: Ambitions

[wraithkeeper]

Title: Ambitions
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Comments

[csi_vixen]

Oh, Neal.

This just about broke my heart.

[wraithkeeper]

Thank you for reviewing (and sorry for breaking your heart!)

[doctor_fangeek]

You've taken a really interesting approach here, with the structure of this story, and I like it a lot. Also, I want to hug Neal, now. Okay, so I would be happy to hug Neal almost any time *grin*, but I really feel for the the lost little boy here - so poignant, so sad. Lovely story.

[wraithkeeper]

Thanks for your review! I was nervous about posting this story because of its unusual structure, so I'm glad it worked for you. It seemed like the best way to capture the changes and emotions Neal was going through.

[kriadydragon]

Oh! This hurt, but in a good way. Poor, poor Neal. But it makes sense, because Neal is a romantic and he's loyal. But at the same time, his trust is never quite one hundred percent. Oh, Neal *hugs him*

[wraithkeeper]

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it.

[elrhiarhodan]

Oh, this is so beautifully heartbreaking.

Thank you.

[wraithkeeper]

Thanks for commenting and for the compliment!

[ultracape]

This is heart wrenching.

[wraithkeeper]

Thanks for commenting!