Nov 25, 2010 17:20
I had:
The greater the charge, the greater the separation between the leaves.
The copyeditor has changed it to:
The greater the charge is, the greater is the separation between the leaves.
I think the copyeditor is correct in adding in a verb, but it just sounds terrible. Perhaps just recast?
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On another editing note, I find it kind of funny that my francophone Director at work gives editing suggestions on English text sometimes. Today, my co-worker wrote an email that included a sentence starting with "We are also open to any suggestions...", and Director wrote back, "I think there should be an 'ed' on 'open'". Erm...no. Then she sent out the email adding her own sentence that included "It's important that the website be update." She has "ed" confusion :)
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...but it totally could have been left alone.
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