Being A Donaghy [30 Rock; Jack/Liz]

[regalish]

TITLE: Being A Donaghy
CHAPTER 21: Shutting Off
FANDOM: 30 Rock
PAIRING: Jack/Liz
SPOILERS: Through "Corporate Crush"
RATING: PG
SUMMARY:

Comments

[musical_junkie]

This is officially the greatest chapter of any fanfic ever.

"I mean, I was just doing this as a favor, and he goes and falls in love with me!" She blew a rather unfeminine raspberry through her lips and shook her head at Pete.
Pete shook his head in return, feigning disgust. "Bastard."

LOVE!
I knew she would seduce him.
And the mattress thing... priceless.
I can't believe it's almost over!

*is psyched she got through a whole review without "the A word"* hehe!

[regalish]

AWESOME!

Hehehehe.

Glad ya liked this one -- I brought Pete back because I ♥ him :D

And I couldn't pass up some awkward Liz seduction! *giggle*

Thanks so much, as always!

Chapter 22 goes up tomorrow! :D

[regalish]

Heeee! Thanks so much, Jenndoll! :D

And *gasp!shock* it's replacing Rysten? EEEEP. Oh, I do so miss the Rysten. I found some hot new songs that are very Rysten'y, so I'm hoping I can crank out a new one of those soon!

In the meantime, I'm glad you're still enjoying this one! And yes, hehe. They FINALLY did it. It was torturing me, I had to let them! *giggle*

[calamitysxchild]

YOU STOPPED IT THERE? You tease ;)

Awesome chapter!

[regalish]

HAHA! I know, I'm a little evil ;) Actually, I prefer the term 'wicked', hehe.

Glad you liked this chapter! And don't worry, for all my teasing, I've got an awesome (higher-rated) Jack/Liz oneshot fic in the works for everyone, heee!

Thanks so much!

[silent__dreamer]

Liz figured not many people would know what to say to that. "He really shouldn't have told me he loved me." She became indignant, almost, reliving that moment. "I mean, how dare he? Right?"

Pete nodded with slightly wide eyes. He looked kinda scared of her. "Yeah. Right."

"I mean, I was just doing this as a favor, and he goes and falls in love with me!" She blew a rather unfeminine raspberry through her lips and shook her head at Pete.

Pete shook his head in return, feigning disgust. "Bastard."

haha fantastic dialogue there. This is stuff that I can picture Liz Lemon definitely saying.

"I can't." He stepped back and frowned disapprovingly. "I don't like this mattress."

haha that's really awesome.

Wow, great chapter...the ending...wow, very hot lol. Only 3 more chapters left?

[regalish]

Hehehe, thank you so much for the review!

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this chapter. I particularly love the Pete-and-Liz friendship, so I had to pay a bit more homage to that here. Their dynamic is pretty unique. :D

And yep, 3 chapters left after this one! But there are plenty more Jack/Liz fics in the works!

Thanks again!

[firthgal]

Oh, you have no idea how much I love you right now! I just had this big falling out with my nephew's parents and I'm still steaming angry at them, but you just improved my mood so much!!! That was an amazing chapter. Gah, the tension between them in the bedroom. *fanning self* And the way his eyes raked over her when he caught sight of her nightie. So, so sexy. Brilliantly written chapter, had my heart racing through the whole bedroom scene. And that last line was such a great, non-dirty way of saying that they had sex. Loved it!

[regalish]

Awww, that's a bummer, I'm sorry to hear that! Glad I could lighten the mood a little, though. That is what I always aim for :D

Glad you liked this chapter! Anything relating to Jack/Liz lovin' I'm still a little skittish about. You guys always ease my nerves. I've actually got a higher-rated J/L fic in the works because of a couple suggestions, lol... let's see if I can go through with it! Haha.

Next chapter goes up tomorrow! Thanks so much, as usual, for the kind reviews!!