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Being A Donaghy [30 Rock; Jack/Liz]

Jul 03, 2007 18:44

TITLE: Being A Donaghy
CHAPTER 21: Shutting Off
FANDOM: 30 Rock
PAIRING: Jack/Liz
SPOILERS: Through "Corporate Crush"
RATING: PG
SUMMARY: ( Liz was almost captivated by this side of Jack. She'd never seen him this way before. So ashamed of himself, so deflated. This is what love did to him? )

character: jack donaghy, character: liz lemon, series: being a donaghy, pairing: jack/liz, fandom: 30 rock

Comments 27

carolelombard July 4 2007, 01:14:03 UTC

Incredible. Just incredible.

regalish July 4 2007, 06:22:22 UTC

Hehehe! Thank you so much! :D

dollsome July 4 2007, 01:35:16 UTC

"I can't." He stepped back and frowned disapprovingly. "I don't like this mattress."

HEE, FTW.

Also, guh. This chapter needs to be worshiped.

regalish July 4 2007, 06:23:31 UTC

HEHEHE! Thank you muchly, my dear! This chapter was extremely daunting (but oh-so-much-fun) to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Next one goes up tomorrow! :D

majandratoo July 4 2007, 01:59:57 UTC

WOW. As much as I love this pairing, I never could quite see how they would cross that line when they came to it. Because, they are *them* and so stubborn and hard-headed. And yet, this was elegant, emotional and very real.
Passionate, without being randomly lustful.
It was perfect.

regalish July 4 2007, 06:25:44 UTC

Awww, thank you! That means so much to me, sincerely! I'd had a hard time trying to get them past that line, because like you said -- they're *them* and quite stubborn, so this chapter was a little nerve-wracking initially. I'm glad it went over well :)

Chapter 22 goes up tomorrow night!

Thanks so much, again! As usual - you have made my day ;D

anonymous July 4 2007, 02:24:08 UTC

Finally!!! But I thought Liz was going to say "Oh Jack I love you too" like every fic that I have read however I like it this way better, it is more realistic, more true.

Officially this is my favorite fic ever and going to print it all and re-read it on my mini vacation(something fun and worth of reading) Just Incredible!

regalish July 4 2007, 06:27:21 UTC

Why thank you very much! I'm glad you liked this.

Yeah, I didn't really want to use the patented schmoopy "I love you too!" declaration. It just didn't feel like Liz in that particular moment :D Glad the other direction seemed to work, hehe.

And you are so sweet to want to print this out! That totally warms my heart that you like it so much.

Chapter 22 goes up tomorrow! Thanks again!

imaclanni July 4 2007, 02:24:16 UTC

amazing! i cannot believe that this fic has come this far, and you're still able to keep them in character. awesome!

regalish July 4 2007, 06:28:11 UTC

Hehe, thank you so much! Glad to hear you think it's still in character, because I'm quite the stickler about that ;D

More to come tomorrow!