Watching Over You - Chapter 7

[words_lie]

Title: Watching Over You - Chapter 7
Author: Bluespire
Pairing: Ville/Bam, hinting at Ville/Mige and Ville/OC
Summary: Ville is a Viking warrior, eldest son of Kari, a Viking Jarl. Bam is a slave (called a thrall). What happens when Ville pays Bam's slave price and moves him from the kitchens into his bed?
Rating: Will eventually be NC-17

Comments

[meduusje]

mmmm
lovely!!!!
little bammie all shakey...
adorable!!!

[bluespire]

Yeah, poor Bam. He can't seem to get away from that in this story. :) Thanks for reading and commenting lady. More soon. :)

[ma_ca]

You are under my protection now. I am merely attempting to keep you safe. You should wear clothes appropriate to the weather.
Ain't that cute?
Hopefully Bam won't become all shy and silent again. I'd love to see him open up and show a bit fighting spirit. And of course I'd love to see more action with Ville xD

Very well done~

[bluespire]

Girl, I am trying to get him there. :) He's just not cooperating so much. And Ville's so grumpy. They need to get in line with what I had planned. Lol, just joking but really it just seems to be coming out this way and I'm trying to stay true to the sort of spontaneous nature of the whole thing. Hell get there. I might have to take Ville down a notch. He has a little too much power. :)

Thanks for reading and for your comments woman. :)

[ma_ca]

Isn't it always like this? But don't take away his power, that and his fierceness are the things which draw Bam to him, right? So just to make sure Bam doesn't change his mind, let Ville have his power...x3#

You're very welcome ♥

[astoria_froggy]

Is Ville going to take Bam's slave collar away ?
I wonder if Bam is going to get more daring now that he knows the effect he has on Ville.
You updating so soon was very nice :)

[bluespire]

I don't think he could get away with removing the collar. There's like this whole big ceremony related to it when a slave is freed. It involves putting the collar on a sheep and then the slave beheading it and presenting it bloodied to the master symbolizing the death of his old life or something. I've had to do a little reading on the Vikings so I don't come off like a total moron (but I'm still basically making this all up, lol). But yeah, so I like the idea but i think it would be going to far. :)

I'm trying to update as I write. I was wiped out from a bad cold last week so I went to bed early every night and didn't get anything written. Last night it seemed to flow though. I think I even have another chapter nearly finished so I'll get another update out here soon. :) Thanks lady. :)

[deepest_dark]

I love it when one of your stories makes me giddy, this one does :D

[bluespire]

Can I just tell you that that is so what I needed to hear? Thank you. I've been feeling unsure about this fic, worried about readers yawning or just dropping off all together, lol. Giddy is good. Thank you so much! :)

[deepest_dark]

OMG Yawning or dropping off? you've got to be kidding, why would you say that?
I think the pacing of this is perfect in so much as its driving me insane in the best way, lol

Please keep it coming because your updates give me joy! Seriously. :D

[melindajane]

Yes! This is exactly what I wanted to read this fine afternoon.

Bam's insecurity over being half-naked was perfect. I love that he's always embarrassed in front of Ville. Perhaps I have a minor humiliation kink that I never knew about? Who knows!

Also love the parts about the slave price. Part of me wants Ville to just keep adding junk on there so Bam has to work forever, but I know you've got your own plans for this! :)

Also, “There are other ways to earn my good favor,” Ville growled before his lips pressed down. is illegally hot! Seriously.

So nice to see a quick update!

[bluespire]

This one was dedicated to you lady. Glad you liked it. :) Thanks again for the pep talk. Seems to have worked (last night at least, hopefully you won't have to make it part of your daily routine). :) Thanks lady. :)