Watching Over You - Chapter 6

[words_lie]

Title: Watching Over You - Chapter 6
Author: Bluespire
Pairing: Ville/Bam, hinting at Ville/Mige and Ville/OC
Summary: Ville is a Viking warrior, eldest son of Kari, a Viking Jarl. Bam is a slave (called a thrall). What happens when Ville pays Bam's slave price and moves him from the kitchens into his bed?
Rating: Will eventually be NC-17

Comments

[meduusje]

awwww Ville being his little diva self...
and jealous...
so adorable!!!!

[bluespire]

:) Thanks. Vile is a diva in this, lol. That's kind of funny. Viking!Diva!Ville. :) Thanks for the comment lady. :)

[ma_ca]

Ha! Ville is so bossy and jealous, I can't wait to see him snap xD
And poor lil Bam is so unsettled by all this looks. x3

[bluespire]

IKR? The Looking! I might be overdoing that bit but I can't seem to stop. :) Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

[ma_ca]

Don't stop the looking! That is like the essential of Ville's creepiness! It fits so well. :3

[astoria_froggy]

"What Ville will want in return ..." I have some ideas ... :D
Please update soon !

[bluespire]

I threw that in at the last minute. It's kind of funny, right? Because Ville can have whatever he wants form Bam. But he seems to want to court him. :) Kinda romantic from the big bad Viking!Ville. :) Thanks lady.

[melindajane]

Ahhhhh! So...Bam helping Ville bathe? That's kind of like my new favorite thing ever. Also, Ville being pissy while he does it? Also my favorite thing.

I totally have a crush on pissy Ville. And this Ville...he's so pissy.

He wants Bam so bad, and he's so jealous, and at the end, he's totally protective! He's making him new clothes. (Please tell me you're going to write the part where he watches Bam get measured and flirts with him shamelessly while Bam blushes! Please?)

I don't see why you are so insecure about this. It is totally fantastic and unfolding just perfectly in my opinion. I love slow moving stories, I think lots of people do.

I would say more, but Ville saying "you do it" all pissy like to Bam about drying his hair made me all shivery like! :)

Awesome story, girl. Can't wait for the next post!!!

[bluespire]

To be honest, I didn't even think of having Ville watch Bam get measured. :) Great idea. I have part of the next chapter written already but I'll try to work it in. :)

Yeah, I don't know, I think I vented my insecurities as completely as I can to you already. I don't know. Maybe I will get more comfortable here. It's a challenge at least. Thanks for bolstering me lady. :)

[bluespire]

You were at that show? That's freaking epic. Girl, you are the coolest HIM fan ev-AH! Angry!Ville, I shall see if I can work that in (That's what she said) LOL Um... okay then. Thanks lady. :)