New story...

Aug 03, 2006 22:29

I don't know what's been wrong with me lately, wanting to write but not being able to. I'm not even sure what led to this suddenly springing up in my head tonight. Let's hope it gets stuff going again.

M/I, standalone, post-BDM.

1,525 words )

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buffygirl52789 August 5 2006, 17:35:15 UTC
This was just beautiful. Your imagery and description just paints a lovely picture and it's very easy to picture everything happening. You have the character of Inara down perfectly. I especially liked this bit:
It reminds her of that unguarded moment on Miranda and she cries harder for all the ifs and maybes of her life and his.
Beautifully done!

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surrender_drthy August 6 2006, 02:39:55 UTC
perfect.
i wanted it to go on and on, forever.a nd be a massive, giant fic. but it couldn't possibly. it is what it is, you know? perfect length, perfect content. perfectly written, and achingly honest.

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thewatch August 6 2006, 09:49:19 UTC
Really beautiful! Perfect Inara the end is lovely. Sweet and tender and just right.

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paiger1218 August 6 2006, 18:03:05 UTC
LOVE.

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ferr89 August 9 2006, 02:27:30 UTC
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

I adore your stories ( I may have mentioned that a few dozen times before LOL) and this one is right up there. You capture their voices and thoughts and mannerisms soo very well my dear.

I'm glad you're back and writing again.

Jenn

Oh, and would love you forever if your muses lead you in the direction of "Risk" too. ;)

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