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Aug 03, 2006 22:29

I don't know what's been wrong with me lately, wanting to write but not being able to. I'm not even sure what led to this suddenly springing up in my head tonight. Let's hope it gets stuff going again.

M/I, standalone, post-BDM.

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last_archangel August 5 2006, 02:41:45 UTC
The whole things was great, but this sentence
It's not too hard to accept River sitting at the helm, for it seems she's wearing Wash's spirit like a mantle about her shoulders, with dinosaurs keeping vigil at her fingertips.
was so incredibly brilliant. I am blown away by the beauty of that sentence. Amazing!

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alexao August 5 2006, 02:57:46 UTC
This is really lovely.

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deadpoetwoffie August 5 2006, 05:44:22 UTC
guh. wow. that was gorgeous!!!!!

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terimaru August 5 2006, 06:40:29 UTC
I had almost forgotten how much I delight in your writing. It's wonderful to see more of it. This was so very good. It left me smiling and all smooshy inside.

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ceslas August 5 2006, 06:47:21 UTC
Another sip, and it's even easier for amusement to turn to melancholy. Perfect, and completely true.
Borrow your brothers crappy little notebook more often, because I agree that this is perhaps the most perfect post-BDM Inara I have seen.
she knows she's not surrendering, not giving up anything she wasn't ready to. *Happy wibble*

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