New story...

Aug 03, 2006 22:29

I don't know what's been wrong with me lately, wanting to write but not being able to. I'm not even sure what led to this suddenly springing up in my head tonight. Let's hope it gets stuff going again.

M/I, standalone, post-BDM.

1,525 words )

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apocalypticbob August 4 2006, 03:27:26 UTC
Beautifully done!

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browncoat_2x2 August 4 2006, 05:10:28 UTC
Beautiful... this was just lovely. I could completely believe Inara's reaction in the galley, could *feel* it myself...

Sorry to hear about your writing frustrations. I do hope this will help things come again. It's great to see more of your work!!

Wonderful!

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goldy_dollar August 4 2006, 15:07:13 UTC
Mmmmmmmm. So beautiful.

I feel like you took your time with Inara, and it all reads true. I adore reading fic from her POV, but only when it's done right (which I think you've done here). And I love that ending scene between Mal and Inara. It feels very... natural, not forced at all, and that's a great way to capture it.

She had fought alongside this crew--this family--had been ready to die with them, for them. It wouldn't be right not to live with them now.

That is so well put.

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wingstar August 4 2006, 19:39:58 UTC
Oh, this is beautiful. *applauds*

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budclare August 4 2006, 23:44:41 UTC
Aw... :)

But you have a "fro".

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words_in_flight August 7 2006, 00:05:07 UTC
Fix-ed (plus another glitch I spotted looking for that one).

Glad you liked.

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