I don't know what's been wrong with me lately, wanting to write but not being able to. I'm not even sure what led to this suddenly springing up in my head tonight. Let's hope it gets stuff going again.
I feel like you took your time with Inara, and it all reads true. I adore reading fic from her POV, but only when it's done right (which I think you've done here). And I love that ending scene between Mal and Inara. It feels very... natural, not forced at all, and that's a great way to capture it.
She had fought alongside this crew--this family--had been ready to die with them, for them. It wouldn't be right not to live with them now.
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Sorry to hear about your writing frustrations. I do hope this will help things come again. It's great to see more of your work!!
Wonderful!
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I feel like you took your time with Inara, and it all reads true. I adore reading fic from her POV, but only when it's done right (which I think you've done here). And I love that ending scene between Mal and Inara. It feels very... natural, not forced at all, and that's a great way to capture it.
She had fought alongside this crew--this family--had been ready to die with them, for them. It wouldn't be right not to live with them now.
That is so well put.
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But you have a "fro".
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Glad you liked.
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