FAIL!FIC FRIDAY!!

[wordlesslove]

Title: Torture, Vestiphobia, & Falsetto, Oh My~
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: OT5
Summary: Fail!sex with TVXQ.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction depicted about real people, I own none of them.
A/N: soo... anyone remember this post? the first part is dialogue only, so use your imagination lovies!! the last two are (i hope) pretty much self explainatory~

Comments

[supershinkime]

WELL...FOR A FAIL!FIC, IT WAS THAT BAD. CONFUSING (I GUESS IT WAS THE GOAL LOL) BUT IT WAS QUITE AN ENTERNAINMENT. THANK YOU~!

[wordlesslove]

THANK YOU FOR THE CONCRIT!

I GUESS IT MAKING SENSE IN MY HEAD IS DIFFERENT THAN IT MAKING SENSE IN MY HEAD. THE FIRST PART (DIALOGUE ONLY), THEY ARE IN A ROOM, IT'S MEANT TO BE READ AS SOMEONE LISTENING IN, WITHOUT SEEING THEM~
I'LL TRY TO FIX THAT FOR THE FUTURE^^

THANKS AGAIN!!

[wordlesslove]

*I GUESS IT MAKING SENSE IN MY HEAD IS DIFFERENT THAN IT MAKING SENSE ON PAPER (WHAT I ACTUALLY MEANT TO WRITE ;_____;)

[supershinkime]

IT WAS FINE, I HAD UNDERSTAND XD BUT NOW I'M READING THE INTRO MORE CAREFULLY, I UNDERSTAND THAT THOSE ARE THREE PIECES AND IT MAKE SMORE SENSE LOL

[tito_grizzly]

SOMETIMES I DON'T KNOW WHO SAID WHAT...LOL

[wordlesslove]

LOL, ACTUALLY THE FIRST PART IS SUPPOSED TO BE LIKE THAT, YOU KINDA HAVE TO GUESS, THEY ARE SUPPOSED TO BE IN A DARK ROOM SOMEWHERE YOU CAN'T SEE, BUT ONLY HEAR THEM~
I HOPE THAT CLEARS IT UP SOME^^