Really should have done this ages ago. *headdesk*

You know the deal, folks. Crit, questions and suggestions go here. I'm very open to crit and I'm never really 100% sure I'm playing a character correctly (as it is I think Ran Fan is being too wordy) so help would be appreciated.

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I am told that this place is ruled by scientists who have power over time and space, and who can manipulate life and death. This power would make them equal to the Gods, yes ( Read more... )

[[It is evening, and the city is bathed in the red glow of the sunset ( Read more... )

[[A series of random beeps and a soft grunt of frustration come over the communicator. A timid female voice can be heard in the background.]]

Is this "technology"? Why does it make these noises?

[[Her voice, although still soft and slightly hesitant, comes through clearly now she has figured out how to use it]]

[[Voice: Xingese (Equivalent to Chinese ( Read more... )