First Dance (Puck/Kurt, PG)

May 02, 2010 00:48

Title: First Dance
Author: lezi
Characters: Kurt/Puck
Challenge: Song
Rating: PG?

Because I'm bored and overtired. )

challenge: songs, character: noah puckerman, author: lezi, character: kurt hummel

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lezi May 2 2010, 17:12:49 UTC
You're welcome, and thank you for your lovely review. (: ♥

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na_shao May 2 2010, 18:12:52 UTC
I really adore this. Your style is fantastic, sweet, light-hearted, perfect. That's what I love with drabbles : people can give so much with so few words. And your works are always so great.

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lezi May 2 2010, 20:05:54 UTC
:D Yes, the benefit of drabbles is, while you're limited to a set amount of words, you force yourself to make the most of what you have.

Thank you, love!! I haven't talked to you in a while. How're you doin'?

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na_shao May 2 2010, 20:39:33 UTC
That's true. That's why I love drabbles more than everything.

You're welcome ♥. I'm doing fine. A bit tired because of my huge exam week but now it's done and I'm glad I did well in every subject ! What about you ? ♥

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alter_alterego May 8 2010, 04:16:03 UTC
How did you make 100 words feel like a full-fledged story?

While I completely agree with Kurt's sentiments--and love Puck's response, I think what caught me about this was their comfort as a couple. They are so at ease with each other--touching a knee, sitting on a lap, kissing knuckles--and it's beautiful.

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lezi May 9 2010, 00:13:26 UTC
♥ As usual, I love reading your review!

I love little couple-y things in fic that I read, so I like to try and integrate it into my own.

I'm glad you liked it!!

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gleeker13 May 9 2010, 03:10:54 UTC
I loved this :) Not much more to say to that.

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lezi May 9 2010, 05:57:08 UTC
♥ Love you. (:

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kirke_novak May 24 2010, 21:43:04 UTC
That was so incredibly sweet and true. The sentence about the first dance was beautiful.

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lezi May 25 2010, 00:14:05 UTC
Thank you! (: I'm glad you liked that line.

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