I rather enjoy the less usual pairing of Colin/Wayne so kudos for that! It´s also an interesting scene though I wouldn´t have minded to get a wee bit more back-story for it... but heck, you probably intended it as just a snippet in time so ignore me.
But please hun, proof read. Capital letters were not used, you kept changing between tenses and there were a couple of typos. It´s still easy to read and none of the meaning gets lost but it would be easier if proof read :)
thank u and i will look over it. i try not to go back and forth between tenses but i had gotten so caught up in getting it down that i guess i didnt check. lol thanks for the heads up though. means a lot
I am woefully behind in reading/commenting, so I'm just getting around to reading this one. I am rather fond of Colin/Wayne, though you don't really see that pairing too awful lot. This was so sweet. I love me some good fluffiness, and a nice screw in the woods is never a bad thing, either, is it? Love the premise, and love the emotion behind it, both from you, and from the guys.
Also, a rather unexpected, but no less nice touch having both of the guys' head shots at the end.♥♥♥
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I rather enjoy the less usual pairing of Colin/Wayne so kudos for that! It´s also an interesting scene though I wouldn´t have minded to get a wee bit more back-story for it... but heck, you probably intended it as just a snippet in time so ignore me.
But please hun, proof read. Capital letters were not used, you kept changing between tenses and there were a couple of typos. It´s still easy to read and none of the meaning gets lost but it would be easier if proof read :)
Also, the last 3 lines are pure love!
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Also, a rather unexpected, but no less nice touch having both of the guys' head shots at the end.♥♥♥
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im glad that u liked it. and no, having some good fluffy sex in the woods is not a prob lol
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