Psychosocial - Chapter 2

[improvfan88]

Here is the second installment. I finally fixed the cut (I think :D) This one's from Colin's POV. Thought it would be interesting to switch evey chapter. I need cheering up so please give me feedback :D I'll love you forever! (P.S. MEN BY THE WAY! ARGH!! Sorry, I needed to get that out of my system

Comments

[graciewoooo]

Lol sorry I didn't comment on the other chapter.
I'm liking this fic very very much. It's really awesome.

Heh "You like water sports?" XD
That made me roflysst (rolling on floor laughing yet somehow still typing)
Btw, is the title taken from a Slipknot track? lols very nice.
Anyway, great chapter, and poor Colin (and brad and jeff)
Can't wait to read more ^^
Thanks for posting
xx

[improvfan88]

Thanks for explaining the rotflysst. The water sports thing was the first dirty thing I could think of. But don't worry bout not commenting! You are now, so it's all cool :D
Yeah, the title's from Slipknot's amazing song! I love Slipknot. I'm very weird.
I always feel bad for doing mean things to Colin, but I nearly always have Ryan make it all better :P
Next chapter up soon. I'm gonna try and be a chapter ahead. So I'd best get typing! :D x x

[saiya_tina]

Oh wow, OH WOW! This is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! I love mysteries! Poor Brad.... :(

[improvfan88]

I feel kinda bad about Brad, but he had to go! For a good reason! :P Next chapter up very very soon, I promise! :D x

[blindlyluv]

First, they say justice is blind, or in this case blindlyluv. I sentence aggravating male to compose 26 hoedowns. One about a word beginning with each letter of the alphabet.

Second, you know already how much I adore you and your writing... But this is taking it to new levels. I watched with dread as the little indicator on the right got closer and closer to the bottom, signalling the end of this read.

Please, more, or I shall surely die, slowly, falling into a morose funk of undefined loss.

Yeah anyway, great job and please do keep it up. You have major talent and the heart added to your work makes this remarkable.

And oh, am so looking forward to the next chapter. Bring it on.

[improvfan88]

See drunken muses other comment ;)
Nah, lovey, you know I love your comments! Gimme more!
Can you handle the next chapter for sure though. Cos there is *gasp* A HINT OF MAN SMUT! Nooooooo!
Only a hint though. But I can promise a full sexy love smut scene. (You can give me a prop for it though. The choc and ice cream one went down well.) :D x

[boppotheclown]

Looove this!!! I like that you switch the POV every chapter, that makes the story even more enjoyable.

"We'll improvise"

♥ this one :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!! I always looking forward for this story! Keep up the good work! :D

[improvfan88]

Yeah, I needed something that would make this interesting so decided on the POV thing. Thought it would be good too, to see what they are really thinking and not the other person's perception. Glad it works!

The "we'll improvise" line is def my fav in this chapter. Thank you for the compliments though. Makes me smile :D x

[ryansgal63]

This is GREAT! Keep going!!

[improvfan88]

Thankies :D I will keep going. Next chapter up soon! :D x