Psychosocial - Chapter 2

[improvfan88]

Here is the second installment. I finally fixed the cut (I think :D) This one's from Colin's POV. Thought it would be interesting to switch evey chapter. I need cheering up so please give me feedback :D I'll love you forever! (P.S. MEN BY THE WAY! ARGH!! Sorry, I needed to get that out of my system

Comments

[luvstories]

Again, sorry for the comment that's well behind everybody else's, and again, (citing water sports, entrails and silver platters) EEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

I like the change-up in the character perspective and definitely the drama. Others have said it; I'll say it too: Poor Brad! Poor Chip! Poor Jeff! GO Ry and Col!

More applause, and more fic soon please!!!!

[improvfan88]

It's alright! And I apologise for making you 'Ew!' :P
Yeah, I feel bad for killing off the guys. I think I'm going to get a couple of 'OMG, how could you?' soon! But Ry and Colin will be going just a little bit in the next chapter. (Just a smidge.)
Fic soon for sure :D

[yamina_chan]

Allright, Colin had no time to worry about Ryan not sending that SMS since he had to worrie over himself first.
By the way, I noticed that some of the partsd of the investigation seem to be off, considered to what they're usually like.
Still, it's not bad and that change of perspective was a good idea.
“We’ll improvise.” was my favourite line here XD

[improvfan88]

Yeah, I'm good with psychological things but when it comes to police things, not too good! Hopefully gonna try and improve on the police thing.