Promises - Part 5

[improvfan88]

Well, here it is! And I wrote this while feeling very very sorry for myself cos I'm currently suffering from the dreaded flu! I even had to miss Uni and the chance of an extra shift at work due to this thing! Sucks so much! Anyway, let me know what ya think! Comments fuel my writing module of my brain.

Author: improvfan88
Story: Promises
Pairing: Ry/

Comments

[drgncrystlwlkr]

Oh my... NOW that is PURE SMEXY there, I love it!!! <3 <3 <3 <3
WHAT, where did Colin go?!?!?! I hope he comes back that way it doesn't look like he gave Ryan a one night stand.

Great job hun, I'm so into this fic.
I'm sorry that you're ill hun, I hope you feel better soon.

[improvfan88]

Well thank you! Colin went away... I'm not too sure where he went. But I'll find him!
Thanks for your concern as well, I'm feeling a bit better now. Just runny nose and killer throat. But I have my energy back so I'm back to writing these pretty fast! (Hopefully!) x

[rentluver07]

Mmmmm. It is 3 in the morning, I am finally going to bed, and mmmm! What dreams I'll have! That was pure, unadultered hotness! Way to go, girly! And I'm going to have a little something to say to Mr. Mochrie if he doesn't come back!

[improvfan88]

Well thank ya very much! I love writing smut! I'm also thankful I live alone when I write smut ;) I don't know if Mr. Mochrie will be gracing Mr. Stiles with his lovely naked presence, I'm kinda just writing this as I go :P x

[blindlyluv]

Ok... Colin better be nice to our Ry... Probably overreacting protectively here, but Colin doesn't seem to have the best track record.

Anyway, I hope while they were being held captive and making you soup, they put lots of garlic in....

Great writing... just make sure you keep Colin in line. 8D

[improvfan88]

He doesn't really does he? I feel kinda bad cos I do like Colin! He may get a chance to redeem himself..... maybe.........
They did! :P I've actually heard Colin is a good cook so maybe I should actually kidnap him........ Bring him back to his homeland! (Scotland people!)
And I will. I'll punish him by forcing to go out and buy me chocolate and soup! And garlic! :D x

[blindlyluv]

Hey, if you're adding chocolate... I'' be there also. (And don't forget the Ry). LOL

[improvfan88]

Oh yeah. Ryan, cigarettes and chocolate. I'm sure I'd be better in no time :P Ryan doing his animal impressions and accents, Colin cooking and me n you smoking cigs and eating choc. How cool would that be? x

[fanfiction21]

okay even without the pure smexy-ness of this chapter, i would have likkked it anyway. the dialog was great. and i hope clin is coming back.

[improvfan88]

I hope so do! But thankies very much! The smex is needed you see. Not only do I LOVE writing smut, you'll see why is serves such a purpose in the next chapter. Maybe the next two. I'm not entirely sure what's going to happen. I personally liked the 'Get away from my nipples' line. x

[hannah600]

Oh noes Colin's gone!!! :O He better have a good reason grr still the smut was hot lmao great work ^_^

[improvfan88]

Well thank you very much! I work hard to make sure my smut is hot. I'm still trying to think of Colin's excuse (if he has..... mwahahaha!) x