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[graciewoooo]

Title: Sometimes You Can't Make It On Your Own
Pairing: Ryan/Colin
Summary: When you hate to show weakness and emotion, what will you do when it all comes crashing down?
Author’s Notes: I’ve been a bit pissed off because I haven’t been able to finish ANY fic I’ve been working on so I thought I’d write this just because I hit a lil bit of inspiration

Comments

[jie_jie]

Awww, poor Ryan! Never really read Ryan as vulnerable before but you managed to show that trait really well but still capture the rest of his persona.

The graveyard scene was really well written, am very glad that Colin found Ry and gave him much needed comfort.

Hope writing this lovely little fic helped clear out your writer's block on your other stories...there really is nothing worse! *gives writers block a kick*

[graciewoooo]

Na the writer's block is still here I am afraid :/ Oh well, it shall pass in a few decades :P

Aww thanks for the lovely comment :) Yes I like to think Ryan is just as vulnerable as the rest of the human race :P
And Colin is just adorable, 'nuff said :P

Aww thank you. I'm not sure I like the graveyard scene all that much ,it seems a bit messy.

But thank you for your lovely comment :)
xx

[jie_jie]

*nods* What charminglygawky said!

[graciewoooo]

LOL Thankyou XD
xx

[charminglygawky]

That was just stunning, Ryan was so vulnerable but in a realistic way. I think he would play the hard tough persona but he is human and you showed that without making him look weak. He only opened up to Colin and that is just... *runs out of words*

(well almost, I want to reassure you that the graveyard scene is beautiful; yes it is messy, but then so are the emotions. It fits the tone perfectly and has some lovely images in it!)

[graciewoooo]

Awww wow!! Thank you so much!!
I don't know what to say to that comment, that blew me away :)
Aww really, thank you very much. Yes, you always see Ryan play the hard man, so I thought I'd try to make him seem less human.

Thanks for the added part of the graveyard scene. I'm still not liking it myself though, but I'm too lazy to change it now XD.
Thanks for the comment :)
xxxxx

[rycolfan]

I thought that was really moving *sniff*

I agree with gawky - you captured the emotions of the situation perfectly, drawing the reader in and making them empathize with Colin's fear and Ryan's internal conflict.

Well done! :o) x

[graciewoooo]

Awww thankyou so much :)
I really appreciate the comment :)

Poor Ryan. The things I do to him in these fics :/ lmao.
Thank you very much :)
xxxxx