Falling Into Fervour: Chapter Six

[draconica_nova]

Title: Falling Into Fervour - 6/6
Pairing: Colin/Ryan
Overall Rating: R
Chapter Rating: PG-13
A/N: The final installment. The song mentioned is Forgiven by Within Temptation, and this story is kind of dedicated to my Dad, who has moved to New Zealand for five years and whom I miss terribly. x
And now that some of life's demands are out of the way, I

Comments

[blindlyluv]

mmmm, even sweeter the second time 'round. Odd isn't it, how I was craving this and you KNEW? Luvly...

xx

[draconica_nova]

Of course I'd post for you, you know how awesome your influencial powers are. :D Thanks, luv! x

[iloveanyonebutu]

For a while there I was actually starting to hate you - when Colin and Ryan left and went their separate ways, it just seemed to have such a finality about it that I wasn't expecting it to be fixed. And after the last chapter where they were so happy too :(

But hurrah for the ending!

Yes yes yes yes! This is exactly what should have happened! I love how symbolic Ryan's nightmare was as well ^^ This was great! Just the perfect mix of angst and a happy ending!

[draconica_nova]

Aww, sorry for the hate. D: But yay that the ending cheered you up! They do belong together, like... erm, the teeth of a zip. :D

Thanks for reading, lovely! x

Loved This <3

[jerluvsdean]

I LOVED this! :D I'm in love with your awesome balance
of Narrative and Dialogue! You're also really good at
painting a picture, I can see it all very clearly.

I'm not very good with comments, but you did a wonderful job with this!! <3

It's also sweet you dedicated it to your Dad :')

Re: Loved This <3

[draconica_nova]

Not good with comments? But my dear, this one still managed to fill me with warm fuzzies! Thank you very much! x

[trulyobsessive]

I love the mental image you've created in the beginning of this chapter, with them waking up in each other's arms and being all cuddly! It's so sweet. :D

When Ryan was driving away, I just kept thinking "go back to Toronto, why are you driving away?!" Well done on the emotive writing, you really made my heart ache for them.

And then the ending! Yay! They belong together. :D

Thank you so much for writing and for sharing this -- I enjoyed reading it.

[draconica_nova]

I seriously thought about cutting his break lines. That'd teach him for abandoning our favourite bald Canadian. ):<

You are most welcome, friend. Happy future reading! x

[pdglyph]

This was great, and when Colin told him he had to go I was sitting here going "Fuck 'have to go'!" Just an awesome amount of fluff.

However, what about Pat?

[draconica_nova]

xD! Aww, I love you for that. Many hugs! :D

And erm, not sure, I left that for readers to speculate. Ryan would probably tell her and some stage.

I guess I left it open for an epilogue, however I never wrote one in the end. D:

[pdglyph]

She suddenly became a lesbian, shaved her head, got a tattoo of the Fonz on her ass, and began attending Lilith Fairs. The End.

[draconica_nova]

WIN! Go, Pat. :D