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[FIC] Love and Sex 7/8

Sep 25, 2005 15:43

Title: Love and Sex
Author: Clay
Pairings: Mainly Chip/Wayne and Chip/Drew, but there’s also Wayne/Drew, Ryan/Colin, Greg/Brad, and a mention of Greg/Ryan. Yes, my little Whose Line soap opera. Chip’s POV
Rating/Warnings: NC-17 over all, but most chapters are just R
Summary: “They had been friends who had taken to helping each other out with ( Read more... )

s: love and sex, p: colin/ryan, p: chip/drew, g: romance, p: brad/greg, p: chip/wayne, a: clayangel, p: drew/wayne

Comments 9

indybaggins September 25 2005, 20:04:50 UTC

Oh! Nice! I so want it to work out between them now... And the rain scene was very well done, kissing with lips wet with rain... aaaah :)
Oh and can we have a little more of Colin and Ryan before this is all over? Please? :)

Indy

clayangel September 25 2005, 20:08:10 UTC

Oh, don't worry. There's more Ry/Col. ^_~

indybaggins September 25 2005, 20:09:04 UTC

yay! :)

leatharegee September 25 2005, 20:31:57 UTC

Oh sweet! Poor Drew! I did however like that their whole flirting thing began by them flirting *through* discussion of Ryan and Colin though. I don't know what exactly it was, but it was nice to see that Colin and Ryan are like, their model couple of sorts...maybe. I dunno. It's hard to explain but it was a great scene. And the last scene in the rain was really well dont as well. Can't wait for more!

Rebecca

clayangel September 26 2005, 03:13:27 UTC

I'm amused that even in a chapter that has no actual Ryan or Colin in it, I can't seem to stop including them. ^_^

leatharegee September 26 2005, 04:13:38 UTC

I noticed that too, and thought it best not to complain...just in case. Lol. ^_^

leatharegee September 26 2005, 04:14:50 UTC

or rather, i thought it best nlot to mention it, cause you know I;d never complain about you including ryan and colin in a chapter ^_^

xnadex January 18 2009, 04:47:25 UTC

Yes, I realise it's been, what, three years since you wrote this? But...

Oh wow. I totally wasn't planning on commenting on this until the last chapter, but I felt compelled to leave a little something after this one too. Because:

1. I love the flow of this chapter so much. And the scene in the park is just great and there's so much emotion in it. I loved it.

and
2. After a moment Greg pulled back. From my angle, I couldn’t see his face, but I could still see Brad’s. He was grinning broadly now, almost laughing. He said something, short and sharp, and then pulled Greg into a quick, fierce kiss. It was the first real intimate act I had seen between the two, and despite the fact that I had known already, it still left me feeling odd. It was like the first time you see one of your friends light a cigarette: you may know that they smoke already, but knowing it and seeing it are worlds apart.- That is one of my favourite paragraphs in this entire fic. I absolutely adore it. I love the Greg/Brad, I love the wording, and the comparison ( ... )

clayangel January 18 2009, 13:07:13 UTC

Wow, I'm just happy that people will still read this story 3 years later, especially considering the main pair is Chip/Drew (my secret OTP :P) Thank you so much for your kind words. ^_^ This was only my second story in the fandom, but in a lot of ways I consider it my first, so it'll always hold a special place in my heart, and it makes me happy to know people still enjoy it.