[FIC] Love and Sex 7/8

[clayangel]

Title: Love and Sex
Author: Clay
Pairings: Mainly Chip/Wayne and Chip/Drew, but there’s also Wayne/Drew, Ryan/Colin, Greg/Brad, and a mention of Greg/Ryan. Yes, my little Whose Line soap opera. Chip’s POV
Rating/Warnings: NC-17 over all, but most chapters are just R
Summary: “They had been friends who had taken to helping each other out with

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[xnadex]

Yes, I realise it's been, what, three years since you wrote this? But...

Oh wow. I totally wasn't planning on commenting on this until the last chapter, but I felt compelled to leave a little something after this one too. Because:

1. I love the flow of this chapter so much. And the scene in the park is just great and there's so much emotion in it. I loved it.

and
2. After a moment Greg pulled back. From my angle, I couldn’t see his face, but I could still see Brad’s. He was grinning broadly now, almost laughing. He said something, short and sharp, and then pulled Greg into a quick, fierce kiss. It was the first real intimate act I had seen between the two, and despite the fact that I had known already, it still left me feeling odd. It was like the first time you see one of your friends light a cigarette: you may know that they smoke already, but knowing it and seeing it are worlds apart.

- That is one of my favourite paragraphs in this entire fic. I absolutely adore it. I love the Greg/Brad, I love the wording, and the comparison to the cigarette smoking. Damn, I really felt that whole scene.

Anyway, I must go read the last chapter...

[clayangel]

Wow, I'm just happy that people will still read this story 3 years later, especially considering the main pair is Chip/Drew (my secret OTP :P) Thank you so much for your kind words. ^_^ This was only my second story in the fandom, but in a lot of ways I consider it my first, so it'll always hold a special place in my heart, and it makes me happy to know people still enjoy it.