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Seldom Second Chances (8.5/13)

Nov 12, 2014 23:31

Title: Seldom Second Chances
Author: Clay
Pairing: Ryan/Colin
Rating: NC-17 (for later chapters)
Summary: When a freak accident drops an impossible opportunity in Ryan's lap, it's up to him to decide whether to squander it, or to change his fate by going after the one thing he's always wanted.
Word Count: ~1800
Prompt & Author's Notes: Again ( Read more... )

g: fantasy, g: romance, g: drama/suspense, [whose-a-thon entries], a: clayangel, p: colin/ryan, s: seldom second chances

Comments 9

fta2008 November 13 2014, 08:53:03 UTC

First, thank you. Because you make me think more deeply in this story is not just for fun ( ... )

clayangel November 20 2014, 14:08:59 UTC

Aw, thank you. ^_^ I appreciate you saying my stories make you think because while I like them to be fun, I also like them to have meaning, too ( ... )

rycolfan November 13 2014, 11:48:43 UTC

Loved this one. Even though it was just driving and dialogue, it felt very natural. And it's nice to see that Colin is starting to open up a little more. :)

As for chapter posting, your half chapters are as long as other people's whole chapters (other people being me, for one XD) so I say keep posting every week, as long as you can manage that. Otherwise, I'm perfectly happy to wait.

clayangel November 20 2014, 13:56:39 UTC

Thank you. ^_^ I think more chapters are going to be like this one as the story shifts gears. The first half was Ryan going down hill, and now he's picking himself up again. It won't necessarily be a smooth journey, but it should definitely be less crazy than the beginning.

madie600 November 13 2014, 13:50:09 UTC

Loved the chapter! Great conversation between Ryan and Colin. The chapter felt longer than it was, which is always good. Post whenever is easiest for you, as long as you don't stop posting altogether I will be happy!! :)

clayangel November 20 2014, 13:54:51 UTC

Thank you so much! And yeah, this felt like it's own contained unit, which is why I was comfortable posting it as its own thing.

animefangz November 13 2014, 18:32:15 UTC

I'm fine with half chapters, but I can wait too. Just do whatever you think it best.

clayangel November 20 2014, 14:09:45 UTC

Thank you for your input. ^_^ I was leaning toward the half chapters since I think 2 weeks between chapters is too long, and I'm glad to see that everyone's in agreement.

roseofpain84 February 13 2015, 05:10:07 UTC

And now I'm making theories and wondering if this is going where I think this is going....huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh.
This is exactly why I wait until and entire story has been posted till I start reading...ahahahahaa.
(and then my internet goes off for an hour while I'm doing it. :-))))))))) )