[FIC] Ever After (Chapter 4/11)
Title: Ever After
Main Pairing: Jeff/Greg, with background Chip/Wayne and Colin/Ryan
Rating: R for language
Total Word Count: 17,890
Chapter Word Count: 1,627
Summary: Jeff’s a directionally challenged actor who can’t seem to catch a break. Chip promises that Jeff’s new GPS will be the solution to all of his problems, but why does it seem to cause ( Read more... )
Main Pairing: Jeff/Greg, with background Chip/Wayne and Colin/Ryan
Rating: R for language
Total Word Count: 17,890
Chapter Word Count: 1,627
Summary: Jeff’s a directionally challenged actor who can’t seem to catch a break. Chip promises that Jeff’s new GPS will be the solution to all of his problems, but why does it seem to cause ( Read more... )
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“Shit! It’s almost two-thirty. I’d better plug you in. I wouldn’t want to leave you turned on all night.”
*sporfle* Oh Jeff. Loved this chapter! :)
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Lol, I have to confess to some method-writing with this chapter... I wrote the middle-of-the-night conversation at 1:30 a.m. while under the influence of some strong painkillers (I'd recently had major surgery). When Sun was beta-ing this chapter, she was like, "Yeah... it shows!" :-)
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“Hey, how come? I thought you’d be perfect for the part of the Like Button.” BWAHAHAHA! This still cracks me up. The whole Jeff/Wayne conversation is great. I love how even though Wayne was once Jeff's significant other, they can still have this friendly, casual relationship. It's like they both knew they weren't meant to be as lovers, so they can get past it and still enjoy each other's company. Well, until Jeff finds out about Wayne and Chip! But even that comes off more as a "my two closest friends have paired off and are leaving me behind, and they couldn't even bother to tell me" kind of hurt than jealousy. The question remains though... is there someone out there for Jeff? IS THERE????
our very own cat whisperer to the stars, Dr. Bradley Sherwood! This still is and always shall be hilarious. Is it wrong that I can totally see Brad doing this after the Colin and Brad tour ends ( ... )
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I love how even though Wayne was once Jeff's significant other, they can still have this friendly, casual relationship. It's like they both knew they weren't meant to be as lovers, so they can get past it and still enjoy each other's company. Well, until Jeff finds out about Wayne and Chip! But even that comes off more as a "my two closest friends have paired off and are leaving me behind, and they couldn't even bother to tell me" kind of hurt than jealousy
Excellent, excellent, excellent. I'm SO glad that came through -- I was trying really hard to have their dating relationship be the awkward thing and then their friendship be the thing they can relax into. And yeah, Jeff's reaction was definitely more about his own aloneness than the fact that Wayne and Chip had got together.
Is it wrong that I can totally see Brad doing this after the Colin and Brad tour ends?
Nope! *giggles*
The midnight conversation with Greg is completely made of awesome. It' ( ... )
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Oh, no, not at all. It's a cool quirky detail and it makes sense to have it keep popping up :)
Although the next time you write a fic I think you should include a hearing clock. I'm just saying.
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Oh Greg. I love you so much.
It's so very interesting how Jeff acts normal to Greg actually talking to him. He's so lonely that his mind needed to create someone who couldn't leave him alone, someone who could literally guide him, be it around the LA streets or through life, like he's doing here...
This is so good. It's 5:51 a.m. right now, and I do not wanna go to sleep without finishing this, but askfnmdljnfg *yawns* Okay. Okay. I'm gonna go get some sleep. Get ready for some more comment-bombarding later today! :D I'm sorry but I'm not sorry.
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Awesome. You've got it. I love it when readers "get" what I'm aiming for!
WOOT for more comment-bombarding! And you'll have the same from me when you wake up and see all these replies in your inbox! *giggles*
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YAY for comment bombarding!! xD
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