Cameron/Sarah: Time Loop 18

[wkgreen]

Title: Time Loop 18

Comments

[resin_ga_miteru]

Haven't read this one yet, but I love all of your Time Loop stories! Long live Camerah!

[wkgreen]

Thank you. :)

[druidesswolf]

I have missed these! this was a great addition, can't wait for more!!

[wkgreen]

Thanks. I have more on the way. :)

[storm_8]

Ha! I loved the last scene with the cat!
And Cameron's sense of humor is hilarious too!
I'm happy to see another one of your time loops and I hope you keep them coming!

[wkgreen]

Thanks! Joke was stolen/borrowed from Masque101's captions. ;)

[tanama30]

nice take on it i love the whole kitten bit. also, the part about cam soul wanting to come out nice touch. great job

[wkgreen]

Thanks :) I struggled a bit with this one, had a ending in mine, but it wasn't lining up with rest of story. And it hit me that Maria's comment about Dance is the language of the soul should be the focus of the story.

[piedra_lumbre]

I love your Time Loop stories, and I adored this one. I particularly love Cameron's sneaky sense of humor and how Sarah only sometimes gets it. Cameron's interaction with the kitten was adorable too, I wish I could ignore cat's claws like that myself. It would be very handy when mine gets into a fighty-bitey mood. I also liked Maria's observations to Sarah, because not only did it nonplus Sarah (always fun), but it captures some of the subtlety of Cameron as a character (and of Summer's acting).

[wkgreen]

Thanks! Yeah, it would be nice to be able to ignore kitty claws like that. ;) Summer did an excellent job, and sometimes you got the sense that Cameron knew stuff but wasn't talking.