finally I was able to read your newest addition for your time loop series. You choose your scene wisely and have done a wonderful job by altering the story line. It was one of the things which bugged me, that Cameron just left Maria and Dimitri to get killed. Your version is way more better and shows Cameron in a light I like =) caring and determined. It's cute that she keeps trying to prevent Maria's death and finally she did it. Yay for Cameron. And it also has the nice side effect of showing Sarah that there's more to her Tin Miss *gg* loved Maria for noticing the special bond between Sarah and Cameron and that she told her that there's a sould inside Cameron. Great story!
Didn't have time to comment back when I read it. May I say your Time Loop idea is pure genius and the installments are getting better and better. This one just proves it. Glad you took a lame idea from the original show -Cameron not saving Maria? C'mon... She bought the whole 'I'm a cat' thingy and she didn't save her not even just for the fun of picking up a fight? Geez-. And of course you made that idea better, you improved it and filled it with meaning. What can I say about the ending? I love cats! Good point there, Cameron could never have a dog, but I'm sure that kitten will go mad about her. Keep them coming and congrats.
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Cameron looks at the kitten, “Hello Cat.”
John’s head snaps back to look at Cameron in disbelief, “You are going to call it Cat??”
Cameron glares at John, “Her.”
This is made funnier, by the fact that I've had this exact conversation. The only difference is, I call my dog, Dog. lol
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You choose your scene wisely and have done a wonderful job by altering the story line. It was one of the things which bugged me, that Cameron just left Maria and Dimitri to get killed.
Your version is way more better and shows Cameron in a light I like =) caring and determined. It's cute that she keeps trying to prevent Maria's death and finally she did it. Yay for Cameron.
And it also has the nice side effect of showing Sarah that there's more to her Tin Miss *gg* loved Maria for noticing the special bond between Sarah and Cameron and that she told her that there's a sould inside Cameron.
Great story!
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Oh, there is at least one more Time Loop that you missed that I know you have been waiting for. :)
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Good point there, Cameron could never have a dog, but I'm sure that kitten will go mad about her. Keep them coming and congrats.
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And yeah Cat, won't care if she is not human, is she warm and does she remember to feed me!
Again, thank you very much for the feedback and glad you enjoyed it. :)
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