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withoutchange

it's insanity

Nov 07, 2010 13:33

another one of my occasional drabble dumps.
/ feat; sunny&sungmin, jiyoung&taemin, iu&taeyang, dara&taeyang, taeyeon&onew, seohyun&yonghwa

( we've come undone )

pairing: sunny/sungmin, snsd, cn blue, pairing: jiyoung/taemin, pairing: taeyeon/onew, pairing: seohyun/yonghwa, super junior, big bang, 2ne1, shinee, pairing: iu/taeyang, kara, #fanfic, pairing: dara/taeyang

Comments 22

forevermyworld November 8 2010, 13:07:47 UTC

♥

that is all.

withoutchange November 10 2010, 01:15:06 UTC

i think that's a good thing.
thaaank you love <33

question outta interest: which one was your favorite? or, if you have one d:

do you have to ask! all of them duh. forevermyworld November 10 2010, 07:13:27 UTC

well all of them are amazing, but the one that really stood out to me was the taemin/jiyoung one, the references to the train/train tracks are genius. and although it's only a couple hundred words you can still feel the longing in it, and the ending is <3. idk i like the bittersweetness of it. i'm not usually one for taemin or jiyoung anything (honestly i don't like them much lol) but your writing has the power of persuasion. haha.

Re: do you have to ask! all of them duh. withoutchange November 10 2010, 21:41:01 UTC

awww, thank youuuu. haha, laura, you're great.
anyways, i think the trains and promises one is my favorite of them all too, quite honestly, but i'm still working on my writing. taemin and jiyoung are one of my new favorites, and i'm glad i can somewhat persuade you(:

haeanna November 8 2010, 16:01:45 UTC

that's why I'm so sad when I click the link and then BAM! ACCESS IS DENIED.

and now I'm smiling like crazy .
my favorite is umbrella shielding tears . 'him, the umbrella shielding her from her tears'

map the heart and hide and seek >>>>CUTE.

and the years between us is T__T

Thank you for sharing. totally dig your drabbles.

withoutchange November 10 2010, 01:16:06 UTC

T_______T; that was me and my stupidity. i was like ha .. ha, I SHOULD SWITCH IT TO PUBLIC, while i am on the bus going to school. sigh.

anyways, thank you for reading <33

whimsical_faery November 8 2010, 19:22:08 UTC

Thank you for sharing this... :)

Yong & Hyun ♥
Taeyang & Dara ♥

withoutchange November 10 2010, 01:16:22 UTC

thank you very much for reading <33

shiningskyline November 8 2010, 23:06:06 UTC

Why must you write so perfectly?! T-T My inner writing monster is jealous. For real. XP

trains and promises: waaah, so melancholic and bittersweet. The line "trains are cooler then admitting one is in love" is just so perfect, and made me smile a lot <3

map the heart: fluffy goodness that just makes my soul so happy.

umbrellas shielding tears: I love the simplicity and gentleness of it. The line "reality hits like a storm and the thunder is shaking up the colors out of their lines" is gorgeousness, especially.

withoutchange November 10 2010, 01:17:13 UTC

your writing is definitely one of my favorites. my inner writing monster enjoys beating the crap out of me, if anything d:

anyways, thankk you very much <3333

unfinishedwing November 9 2010, 01:06:13 UTC

I love that YongSeo drabble and I love your writing style even more. You're making me adore YongSeo even more than I already do. ;) Thanks for sharing!

withoutchange November 10 2010, 01:17:47 UTC

i'm glad :DD yongseo fans unite
thanks for reading!