LJ Idol Week 10: Hedging Your Bets/Streaming

Feb 19, 2016 12:17

Dorris found the head of customer relations to be intolerant and prone to temper tantrums at the slightest hint of unproductivity, but he listened right away to her entire story. Much to her dismay. To be fair, given the situation, it couldn’t very well be avoided ( Read more... )

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halfshellvenus February 19 2016, 21:31:07 UTC
Hahaha! She's the new hero of the show, despite not matching their "babe quotient" demographics, simply because she attracts the spirits that make for the show itself.

I hope those spirits have a lot of things to tell that bank manager, endlessly, until he can no longer sleep at night. :D

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witchwife February 20 2016, 22:17:39 UTC
hahah - I hope so too. A character like Dorris seemed like the most bizarre mix to through into a supernatural type show so I went for it.

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adoptedwriter February 19 2016, 22:07:11 UTC
This was fun to read! I love those Ghost-hunting shows! AW

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witchwife February 20 2016, 22:18:49 UTC
Those shows are totally my guilty pleasure. When I mentioned the idea of writing about one to my sister she begged me to do it. Glad it was somewhat enjoyable - I was worried about the length!

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awakenyourfaith February 20 2016, 06:01:26 UTC
This is such a fun entry!

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witchwife February 20 2016, 22:18:59 UTC
Aw, thanks, pal!

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meridian_rose February 20 2016, 10:18:07 UTC
I liked this a lot :D

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witchwife February 20 2016, 22:19:23 UTC
Oh good! Wasn't sure if it went on too long so happy to be getting some positive feedback.

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rayaso February 20 2016, 17:52:09 UTC
This was so much fun and a creative use of the prompt. I loved the idea of the ghostbusters showing up at the bank and needing Doris even though she wasn't young enough, plus using the bank as a center of ghostly activities made me laugh. Great job!

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witchwife February 20 2016, 22:20:09 UTC
Thank you! One of the longest entries I've written for the comp so far so glad people seem (?) to be enjoying it!

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