Topic 1: Last Chance Idol: In the Garden

[witchwife]

In the GardenIt was our second date and I wanted to leave. I wasn't into him. However, Bradley looked so enraptured by the idea of a Saturday night party that I felt too bad leaving him at the beach. He bought rum, pineapple juice and Sprite, plus some cups made out of coconuts to mix it all into. He looked so ecstatic, it was as if he'd been

Comments

[i_17bingo]

There was someone eating and juggling fire while a girl with a shaved head and purple glasses played the ukelele.

Are you saying they only did this at parties? While you were gone, I'd assumed it was pretty much like this all the time.

[witchwife]

Pretty much!

[grail76]

Not really where I expected it to go.
Well done.

[witchwife]

Thanks. I think the turn comes a bit too fast for my liking, but lesson learned!

[awakenyourfaith]

Oh wow. Totally didn't expect that turn in the story. Nicely done!

[insert that escalated quickly meme here]

[witchwife]

Yeah, it's a bit abrupt. I think the lead up could have been done a bit better. Next time!

Thanks for reading. :)

[xlovebecomesher]

Didn't expect that twist!

[witchwife]

Neither did I, in the moment.

[halfshellvenus]

Poor kitty.

The unavoidable doom of that cat seems like where the narrator is headed if she doesn't develop the means to tell Bradley she's not interested in him. Romantically, she despises him. That is not a good foundation for ANY relationship.

Nice to see you back!

[witchwife]

Glad to be back! Rest assured the Bradley situation was resolved. Eventually.