Tell Me You Love Me Chapter 11

[wishunew]

Title: Tell Me You Love Me
Rating: PG-15 to be safe, strong Language
Pairing/Focus: Onew, Jongho, ninja
Summary: In the movies, when a singer lost their voice, all you had to do was break the shell and they got it back, and everyone lived happily ever after, lesson learned. But movies aren't real, and when a voice leaves, sometimes it doesn't want

Comments

[wishunew]

Spot for manaphasm

[manaphasm]

Well, now that lj is letting me look at this, I can finally add my two cents. After such a long hiatus, wishunew and I are both pretty proud of how this chapter turned out (my one regret being the rushed beta session at her insistence...she really, really wanted to post this asap). All in all, I hope you all enjoy it, especially how super long it came out. I guess the length is kind of a present for all of you, for hanging on so long ^_^

[wishunew]

spot for chireotamahome

[chireotamahome]

glad to have my spot still here.

waa.....
nooo.....
don't let jinki go back to being mute and scared!!
jjong, minho, key and taemin had gone through a lot to help him back. jinki also had gone through hell to be back like that.

i'll cut the kidnappers throat and feed his intestines to the piranhas in the amazon!!

hope to wait for the next chapter:)

[wishunew]

that is a ... very detailed threat. i approve lol. of course you have your spot lol.

he has gone through quite a lot to get where he is now, hasn't he? well, one more chapter, lol.

thanks for reading.

[wishunew]

Spot for mimi_oly

[jinkibumiminho]

Awww...thanks! Back in the morning to read when I can see straight!

[jinkibumiminho]

This was a wonderful chapter. I was relieved that you had Onew bouncing back so well after the last chapter, regaining his trust, his voice, and his, ahem, interests (very sweet kissies). I even enjoyed the TaeKey, which usually weirds me out. I'm hoping that SHINee will collectively open up a can of whoopass on Mr. Baddie.

[wishunew]

i liked the general feel good of the chapter lol. helped build up the "OMG NO" that came when the guard showed up. i hope the time progression wasnt to fast... oh well lol.

i love taekey. i bothers me a lot that ppl cant see them as a couple because of their umma/son relationship, but like, they're not related. lol. so im glad someone who's on the other side of that ship liked them =)

I'm writing chapter 12 right now, but idk when it will be done. so maybe Jongho will save Jinki this time....

lol thanks for reading!

[neongreenfairy]

*GASP* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_< NOT AGAIN!!!! >_<
everything was getting better!!! >_< i hope minho and jonghyun kick his ass!! well it will probably be key with his new self defense moves!! ^_^

yay!! its good that you are back!! ^_^ i missed this story!! ^_^ i can't wait for the next chapter!! thank you!!

[wishunew]

lol thats the reaction i was looking for.

you'll have to wait and see what will happen in the last chapter.

aw your so sweet♥. thanks for reading!

[kaybee38]

AAAAACK! OMG! He was getting better, everything was getting better. OMG no! (I had a feeling the guy didn;t really die in that crash though). Aw man. I hope Minho or Jjongie can save him this time.

[wishunew]

lol, i think maybe it was a little obvious that he wasnt dead, the way i glossed that part over, but i felt it was important for jinki to recover. (why am i explaining myself lol idk.)

i guess you'll find out what happens in the last chapter. will he be saved? or was this whole story just a build up to tragic misery (i fear if i take that path i will be killed lol) but im writing chapter 12 now, so hopefully it wont be too long before i update.... hopefully.

but thanks for reading! ♥