The Misconceptions of Fate

[wishunew]

Title: The Misconceptions of Fate
Author:wishunew
Rating: PG-13 for language and sexual references.
Pairing/Focus: JongTae, onkeyho
Summary: AU, Jinki copes with what happened in the last chapter as more on Jonghyun comes to light

beta'd by Deepgashes after i forced her into doing it for me.
but she was being pushy so she deserved it.

Comments

[goatapplepi]

I am.. quite confused right now.
OKAY LET'S WORK IT OUT (help me if I'm wrong?)
So Jjong is pregnant, but because of SM, he's getting an abortion... and even though HE'S the one not telling Taemin, he's mad that Taemin keeps kissing him and stuff even though he's pregnant? OTL I understand this, but it's not coming out right...

Minho, on the other hand, marked Key, but that'll be hard to work out since they're both alphas, and Minho has feelings for him since the occurrence...

THE THING I DON'T GET IS JINKI.
It sounds like he's been marked before? By either Key or Minho... but I feel like its the latter.
GAHHHH OKAY. Help me ;__;

[anonymous]

....... -flips world-
I ADORE the way you juggle all the relationships and plotlines and dance them around each other and then smush them back together. It's uh-mazing and I usually don't like mpreg at all but here it is APPROVED. I love you author-nim..... Looking forward to next part! ^^

[sandra_hall]

FAAAAAAAATTTTE. uwa, I'm seeing all sorts in the comments. Is the claim legal, biological or both then? Is alpha/alpha bonding an established thing!? super excited for the next chapter!

[choi_minju]

I'm guessing that OnKeyHo was just like a one night stand bond thing that drew them closer.
It seems that the story is pulling them all in a crazy weird situation.
Key has feelings for Minho, and Minho is currently trying to figure Key out.
Onew feels like he screwed up as a leader because of the alpha beta heat situation.
Jonghyun never did drink the pill and had something growing in him, thus the angry hormones, and just spat at Taemin now that he's going to have an abortion.
That news would be good news for the manager but bad news for everyone else in the dorm, especially Taemin.
Taemin is actually kept out of the loop almost all the time.

Wow. When you're not busy, keep updating more! ^^

[lubzyou]

[Minho] was curled behind key, nuzzled into him possessively. Jinki bared his teeth at the sight, moving away from the dozing alphas as fast as his sour body could, blinking back the wetness in his eyes.
soooo, I enjoyed this and then I tumbled down the hill of delicious despair from there. I don't mean to say I enjoyed Jinki's despair but I enjoyed the despair. Totally makes sense.

I want to say more but I just keep taking breaks to clutch my face and roll around on my bed.

I love the way you build worlds and this series so much. (I've read A Tale of Two Princes 5 times or something and this is my second time in the Fate realm).

My puddle of tears grows. Pretty soon I can name it Lake Wishunew.