The Misconceptions of Fate

Feb 22, 2013 23:58

Title: The Misconceptions of Fate
Author:wishunew
Rating: PG-13 for language and sexual references.
Pairing/Focus: JongTae, onkeyho
Summary: AU, Jinki copes with what happened in the last chapter as more on Jonghyun comes to light

beta'd by Deepgashes after i forced her into doing it for me.
but she was being pushy so she deserved it.

Fate is never satisfied. )

series: fate, onho, pg-13, jongtae, onkey, minkey

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she_devil666 February 23 2013, 06:15:06 UTC
:O JJONG NOOO! I'M SURE YOUR LITTLE BABY (girl) WOULD BE SO PRETTY!!! Maybe it's the hormones talking. What will happen?! What will SM do?! Kick him out?! Will Taemin go with him?! Too many questions and not enough answers!

Yay for minkey sticking up for their beta(s)! Their manager is an asshole for sure. I hope this threesome will work out once they get a chance to talk.

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wishunew February 23 2013, 15:07:36 UTC
isnt that the best story though? raising questions with each chapter~

i enjoy making their manager an asshole far to often. he was a jerk in tell me, too.
lol we'll see~

thanks for reading~

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squire_conrad February 23 2013, 08:22:01 UTC
I just love this world you've created. When I saw the update I was excited. Great installment! I love political!Key. It makes the whole world seem more real.

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wishunew February 23 2013, 15:11:57 UTC
Im actually trying to make the world seem very real, is that weird? and i think that Key with his activism helps out a great deal. /i see him as an activist. he'd be protesting for gender identity equality of he wasnt famous and didnt have to worry about backlash

thanks for reading~

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squire_conrad February 24 2013, 03:38:49 UTC
I don't think that's weird at all. Making the world as realistic as possible makes readers more invested in the characters and what's happening. It is something that I enjoy about your writing in general. Of course the smut is awesome, but I like how it tends to be based in realism. Like how in "Bound" you added dialogue that made it reasonable for Onkey to have reached a point in their relationship where that kind of a dominant/submissive sexual relationship is possible.

I definitely see Key as an activist in real life as well. I find his dynamic with Jinki in this world very interesting and realistic because Key means well with his idealism but he is an alpha. While Jinki seems much more practical since he is a beta and actually has to live with the inequality. My personal favorite pairing is Onkey, so I'm really looking forward to the Onkey/Onkeyho conversation to deal with the aftermath.

Thanks for sharing such a great story!

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ezri_sun February 23 2013, 10:48:34 UTC
Did you really just do that?

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wishunew February 23 2013, 15:12:19 UTC
i think i did

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greasetastic_x February 23 2013, 12:41:48 UTC
I literally just read the parts before this yesterday so I screamed when I saw the update today.
Oh my gosh Jonghyun is pregnant. :O why do i have the feeling Taemin will try to convince him out of the abortion or something.
And what's up with Onkeyho? Does Minho want Key even if they're both Alphas?
I'm going to go reread this.
Can't wait until the next part whenever that will come out.

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wishunew February 23 2013, 15:17:09 UTC
did you find them okay? i need to organize my journal better orz.
Jjong is preggo!!! Taemin didnt even know so who knows what he'll do.

keep in mind that Minho bit key, and thats a claim. so social pressure and all.

im sorry i dont update regularly, orz
thanks for reading

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anonymous February 23 2013, 12:48:47 UTC
OH MY GOD. OOOOOOH MY GOD.
This series is gonna be the death of me. I don't even...
Okay, first things first. So Minho's bite did affect Key even though they're both alphas... oh boy, this is gonna be so good, I can't wait to see the three of them trying to work this out, especially since they're my OT3 hahaha!
And MinKey sticking up for Jinki and Jonghyun, ugh, yes. They so would.
And Jjong's decision... I understand hormones making him unstable but oh, is he being mean to poor, clueless Taeminnie...
Great installment! Can't wait for the next one!

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wishunew February 23 2013, 15:20:25 UTC
well Minho is an alpha too. so officially his bite means he claimed Key. which will be fun to get into if the 3 of them would sit down and talk. (god damn it)

also i know that Jjong seems a little bit too all over the place, but more on him and Taemin in the next part.

thanks for reading!

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